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noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
I'm very disapointed with this =( I honestly was not feeling this. I love your begining sequence with the phone and the dark depressing room sequence. That felt right and was excecuted perfectly. But everything after that felt so unsure of itself. Like you didn't have any consitancy with your mood. And all your sources didn't really mix to well with each other. Also there was a scene that got completely butcherd due to some time remapping.