Video: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=170064
Category: Character Profile, Serious, Romance, Sentimental
Anime: Please Teacher
Song: Show Me What I'm Looking For
Artist: Carolina Liar
Any feedback is appreciated
Show Me What I'm Looking For
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Re: Show Me What I'm Looking For
I think that you overdid it a bit with the timings. Some of the your scenes were killed when you timed them to every beat of the song. For example, I think that the ending of your amv could have been really emotional if you hadn't timed so many overlays to beats.
And also, It sometimes seemed like you were using 2 different anime as sources. At first, everything seemed to revolve around the red haired girl, but then out of the blue, other girls started popping in without even being properly introduced. "Especially the chick that jumped off the roof and the blue haired girl. So in a nutshell, the plot of the amv seems hard to follow, and you threw in characters that really should have been left out. (But seeing that girl jump was a really bug OMG WTF moment for me though LOL)
But overall, the idea behind you amv was nice. I think that it was a good song selection and a good anime selection. I think that you just missed a few opportunities to really make your amv emotional.
I give your video a 3.7 out of 5
And also, It sometimes seemed like you were using 2 different anime as sources. At first, everything seemed to revolve around the red haired girl, but then out of the blue, other girls started popping in without even being properly introduced. "Especially the chick that jumped off the roof and the blue haired girl. So in a nutshell, the plot of the amv seems hard to follow, and you threw in characters that really should have been left out. (But seeing that girl jump was a really bug OMG WTF moment for me though LOL)
But overall, the idea behind you amv was nice. I think that it was a good song selection and a good anime selection. I think that you just missed a few opportunities to really make your amv emotional.
I give your video a 3.7 out of 5