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Naked fairytale

Post by FunStorm » Mon Jul 06, 2009 6:49 am

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Re: Naked fairytale

Post by theDarkSite » Mon Jul 06, 2009 7:29 am

well... it's nice vid, but it can be better :roll: First, I think some effects should be better in the fast and dynamic part of the song, because it's quite simple and unfinished (for me at least); you can do better with the sync too, some parts of the vid (few, but there are) lack sync ;) The part with the black&white pics, synchronized with the song was very nice, GJ for that one :up: The song is nice, the choice of anime - too, the AMV title is nice :up: The vid was interesting to watch, that's quite important for me ;) But still, you could do better with some parts of the vid :wink:

4/4.5 of 6 I could say :D
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Re: Naked fairytale

Post by Cenit » Mon Jul 06, 2009 2:43 pm

I really liked it in the beginning but for the last minute it got really really weak. If you had kept up the editng style from before it would be way better. So all in all i didn't like it. Srsly try harder next time . This could have been damn fine!
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Re: Naked fairytale

Post by FunStorm » Tue Jul 07, 2009 5:24 pm

Thanks a lot for your opinions 8-)
theDarkSite wrote:I think some effects should be better in the fast and dynamic part of the song, because it's quite simple and unfinished; you can do better with the sync too, some parts of the vid lack sync
Yeah, it was quite simple AMV and there should have been more dynamic cutting and effects. It's mostly in the scenes that I tried to give there for some base of story. But it really does not look good.
theDarkSite wrote:The part with the black&white pics, synchronized with the song was very nice, GJ for that one :up: The song is nice, the choice of anime - too, the AMV title is nice :up: The vid was interesting to watch, that's quite important for me
I am glad that you even kinda liked it ^^
Cenit wrote:I really liked it in the beginning but for the last minute it got really really weak. If you had kept up the editng style from before it would be way better.
Everybody is saing that las minute sux, and I have to agree. I tried to work on it, I remake it whole and time and again to get some logical and effect ending out of it but in the end it still did not worked ...
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Re: Naked fairytale

Post by Bakadeshi » Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:07 pm

hmm eden vid, ima have to look at this when i get home. Comments forthcomming.

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