Wrist and Razor Sold Separately

[EvaFan]

More basic editing goodness.

Really enjoyed it. Some of the flashes were kind of pointless though even if they were synced... I would of just left em out.

4/5

[hasteroth]

BurningLeaves

I want to kill you now.

The good end was great.

I refuse to watch this AMV.

Go play the VN or stfu

[Pas]

Too soon man... too soon ;_;

As for the technical side of it, the quality was a huge downer but hey. Scene selection felt somewhat off with you seemingly juggling dynamic scenes with still ones, back and fourth which threw me off. Pace was also slightly awkward and I could really notice the cuts, they felt jarring and at points inappropriate. However, despite all that you still managed to get some good mood and flow going on, and like the Keyfag sucker I am, I teared up a little just watching all that again. Bonus points for using BAD END.

Overall 3.5/5 rounded up to 4/5. It was enjoyable but there were too many faults distracting me from the emotion this AMV was trying to build on.

Go play the VN or stfu

Fuck off asshole, jesus christ learn to take your own goddamn advice and shut your fucking mouth once in awhile.

[Tearx]

hmmmmmmmmm.
For the beginning parts with Nagisa I kind of liked the editing, but the sync seemed too rough for some scenes

Spoiler :

once it came down to the kid I really felt like you just smashed everything together to show the story, as a result It did not flow together too nicely. The story itself is just so sad, but I am glad you kept the "bad" ending. I completely hated it once they made it all happy ending in the show. D; soo you get points for that

3/5

[Otohiko]

Whaa, you made a video and I didn't even know about it? Baw! Shame on me.

I don't think 'enjoy' would be the right word for this video At first, I was actually really enjoying the editing - I like how you handled this all through actually, no complaints on the editing front at all from me. Some of the internal sync is actually really neat (if a bit shameless sometime), but all in all everything fits in well. But as the video went on, I actually paid less attention to the editing and more attention to the story. Which is probably the best sign of a successful video here - the video did EXACTLY what it needed to do to be successful, for me anyway - it hit the high-low (but mostly low) dynamic, it nailed down storytelling with characters, plot and obvious complication, it kept very focused, and then of course it ended where you wanted it to (aka on the "thanks-for-ruining-my-day"-tier depressing note). So by the end I'd forgotten about the editing, which is I think exactly what a story-driven video needs to do.

Good job, I think this is your best work yet. I'll take one wrist please.

[Kionon]

Hey now, I listed spoilers can't say I didn't warn ya.

Actually if you go directly to preview you get no such information. I had zero warning.

...tis a good video.

u jark

[Animated]

Agreed to great storytelling.
4/5 (but still, i didn't cry )

[Knowname]

lol poor Oto you can have my wrist than I don't need it xD Not sure about the blurry zooms but I'm not one do discourage artistic impression, excelent video Mandi!

[surfsama]

BurningLeaves
I want to kill you now.

Hmmm, a new vid and a death threat to boot...

>>Heart wrenching<<

[BurningLeaves]

as for the video, a great vid indeed, but the few instances of speed up lipflap kinda urked me a little, as well as a few minor editing quirks.
still on the dramatic elements and story telling. 4.5/5

I completely agree, I figured the lip flap would be the one thing I'd get slammed for, especially in the faster scenes, but I'm glad you were able to enjoy the vid despite this, thank you for letting me know.

More basic editing goodness.

Really enjoyed it. Some of the flashes were kind of pointless though even if they were synced... I would of just left em out.

4/5

Yeah, I could see how there could be to many flashbacks going on here, thanks for the review.

Overall 3.5/5 rounded up to 4/5. It was enjoyable but there were too many faults distracting me from the emotion this AMV was trying to build on.

Thanks for the review pas, (and nifty pas-amation) I'll keep your thoughts in mind if I make another drama like this in the future.

For the beginning parts with Nagisa I kind of liked the editing, but the sync seemed too rough for some scenes

I completely agree they killed it with that end. Thanks for watching, I was a bit rougher with the second part than the first. I tried to shy away from the 'fade to black' typical thing I usually do, which might not have came across very well. But thank you much for letting me know what you thought.

Whaa, you made a video and I didn't even know about it? Baw! Shame on me.

Well you've been busy with broken elbow, thesis editing masturba-... stuff
besides this was a quicky video anyway =p

Good job, I think this is your best work yet. I'll take one wrist please.

Thankies sir, glad you liked it. It's no 'She was' but I think it's ok =p

Actually if you go directly to preview you get no such information. I had zero warning.

...tis a good video.

Ah you are correct sir, then my apologies. If anything you can look at it as a simplified review version sans crappy ending?

Agreed to great storytelling.
4/5 (but still, i didn't cry )

Ah guess I'll have to try harder next time =p

Hmmm, a new vid and a death threat to boot...

>>Heart wrenching<<

Pay no mind to the desperate attention seeking troll
Glad you... uhh... heart wrenched? =p Thanks for watching and edit moar.