Stand in the Rain

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Anicsi
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Stand in the Rain

Post by Anicsi » Thu May 21, 2009 8:05 am

Hello there ^^
This is my first amv on a-m-v.org though I've been editing for a while now. This is also only my second attempt with Final Cut Express and I would greatly appreciate constructive criticism. Tell me what you liked, what you disliked and what could be done better in your opinion. I am happy to share my amvs with you but on the other hand I want to learn and improve. And your feedback helps a great deal to do that :)

So, here it is:
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=168658

Title: Stand in the rain - Anime Mix
Song: Stand in the rain (remix, done by me. Orchestral and normal version)
Artist: Superchick

Footage (in order of appearance):
Ef - a Fairytale of the Two: the First Tale
Ashita no Kimi to Au Tame ni - 'till I reach your tomorrow
D.Gray-man
Code Geass (minor Spoiler)
Kaleido Star
Ef - a Tale of Memories
Kamikaze Kaitou Jeanne
Loveless
Ef - a Fairytale of the Two: the Latter Tale
Kuroshitsuji/Dark Butler
Black Cat
Vampire Knight (Guilty)
Air (Anime)
Tales of Legendia
Full Moon wo sagashite
Air (The movie) (SPOILER)
Kara no Kyoukai
Junjou Romantica

(I hope I didn't forget anything xD)

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Re: Stand in the Rain

Post by CodeZTM » Thu May 21, 2009 2:54 pm

Had the video quality been better, this would have been truly epic. It was well edited, very atmospheric, and fits the song's mood very well. The small audio touches with the bullets firing was very nice. Also, it was a very unique combination of anime to say the least. Also, the part with Shirley from Code geass and the part around two twenty just about made me cry. :shock:

Definilty a keeper on my part, but like I said, I wish that it was better quality, and the few watermarks would have been better removed or cropped out.

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Re: Stand in the Rain

Post by dreamawake » Fri May 22, 2009 5:28 am

Well, I can't really agree with code to much here. The pacing felt incredibly off to me. I think you really tried too hard and wound up over editing the video big time. I like the idea a lot, and this is one of the few instances where Ef didn't bother me too much. So that's a plus in any case. The pacing just felt bad to me throughout the video tho and it really killed it for me. The song edits were a bit iffy too.

I think I'll have to stick with ShadowNos's video to this song.
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Re: Stand in the Rain

Post by SheeGee » Fri May 22, 2009 11:27 am

i actually enjoyed it. if the quality was better it wouldve been a better watch.

the ending was a little off. shouldve slowed it down more

other than that i liked it. good job =)
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Re: Stand in the Rain

Post by Rider4Z » Fri May 22, 2009 5:19 pm

the video didn't really grab me emotionally, but there was a lotta nice footage you spliced together. i gave it 4 *s

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Re: Stand in the Rain

Post by Sephirothishere » Fri May 22, 2009 7:22 pm

Overall it had potential to be much better, in my opinion.

Some parts were kindda odd. Per example, the Air fotage usage at arround 1:48 was kindda of a mood killer, too bright and in no way as dramatic as the song suggests. Ok, it was actually 0% dramatic. The video was also kindda oversynched near the end.
That said, there were also pretty nice parts and the video overall had a pretty nice mood.

3,5/5 lawl

With some quality and editing (audio editing included) fixes, it would be a pretty good Amv

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Re: Stand in the Rain

Post by LeapofFate » Fri May 22, 2009 7:26 pm

ArashinomeAMV wrote: I think I'll have to stick with ShadowNos's video to this song.
This.

The video was alright.
Most of the comments summed up what I thought of the video.
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Re: Stand in the Rain

Post by BurningLeaves » Sat May 23, 2009 2:04 am

I liked it, but I can agree with Arashinome in that it did feel a bit over edited in some places. Your transitions were really nice, a few of your Lelouch clips at the end seemed a bit out of place in a girlie vid. I really liked the eye into bead mask... Good work
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Re: Stand in the Rain

Post by Knowname » Sat May 23, 2009 4:09 am

Yeah this video is just plain astounding. Awesome stuff! Hope you make more like this!
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Re: Stand in the Rain

Post by Ikore » Sat May 23, 2009 12:07 pm

I felt a little lost in the beginning, then you started hitting just in time and it was so cool that you can even forget the creepy quality :sweat:

a little overcharge in the ending, I barely notice it was allen the one playing in the background, and until the second time I watch it :book:

4/5 :up: way to go!
SING! Never mind the words!!!

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