Eviscerated Butterfly [Acen 2009]

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Eviscerated Butterfly [Acen 2009]

Post by Yaaku » Sun May 10, 2009 11:25 pm

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Re: Eviscerated Butterfly [Acen 2009]

Post by BurningLeaves » Mon May 11, 2009 12:14 am

This video seemed to start off with a good (all be it overused) concept of people=shit but as it went on the scenes became more random and there was really no story line left to follow. You used scenes that sort of worked with whatever lyric was being said, but had no correlation between one another.
Sync was good, effects were well done though again overused and without a story line they just become eye candy in a random assortment of scenes. Editing effort shows but concept is lacking. For a dance, happy upbeat kinda thing I think having no concept or story line would be fine but for something serious like this, I'd need to try to understand the point your trying to convey to me in order for it to interest me. Sorry, just not my cup of tea.
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Re: Eviscerated Butterfly [Acen 2009]

Post by Gaurry_no_blond » Mon May 11, 2009 7:34 am

damn, I do similar video on the same song....

Cool video with good technics. :up:
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Re: Eviscerated Butterfly [Acen 2009]

Post by Mol » Mon May 11, 2009 9:15 am

Nothing above average for me, but it was enjoyable :up:
Still better than that MMO.
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Re: Eviscerated Butterfly [Acen 2009]

Post by Yaaku » Mon May 11, 2009 5:30 pm

Thanks guys. ^^
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Re: Eviscerated Butterfly [Acen 2009]

Post by MimS » Wed May 13, 2009 10:41 am

Too much linear. Even when the song is supposed to have more "power"...
So even if the work is good, it's was boring. Sorry
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Re: Eviscerated Butterfly [Acen 2009]

Post by Yaaku » Thu May 14, 2009 7:50 pm

No problem. :P and, thanks for sharing with me your opinion. :)
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Re: Eviscerated Butterfly [Acen 2009]

Post by Death29 » Sat Jun 06, 2009 12:49 am

I think it is bad ass. Song is much better to listen to while watching video, in my opinion. With that being said I do not edit/create many videos so my view is somewhat limited. Also I like the song, but I do not like the full version so I listen to // Innerpartysystem - This Town Your Grave (EvisceratedButterfly Cut) // =-P

Did you just cut it from the full version, or did you edit parts of what you cut?

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Re: Eviscerated Butterfly [Acen 2009]

Post by Kain-x-spirits » Sat Jun 06, 2009 6:24 am

~MimS~ wrote:Too much linear. Even when the song is supposed to have more "power"...
+1
But your vid is interesting, and the editing is good.
Maybe you aren't rather crazy.
Keep on that way.

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