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New K-ON AMV!!

Post by ilostart » Thu May 07, 2009 9:13 pm



This is the first time making an amv of this genre music.

What do you think?

Feedback would be great so I know what to do different for future amvs like this.


Note:
Please don't complain about the upscales, I upscale for quality reasons for various video sites.
Lower quality and more compatible video format versions will be added later to links.

Sorry for wrong anime information, accidentally clicked the wrong button, going to try and have it fixed.

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Re: New K-ON AMV!!

Post by BurningLeaves » Sat May 09, 2009 1:52 am

I think this video is moving just too slow for the audio. Scenes are pretty random, playing too long and are pretty far off the flow of the music. Lots of lip flap and missed sync opportunities. A few good moments such as the feet tapping. I think it would have worked if you had cut the song in half and added a third more footage and timed it well. In a dance video you're not really expecting a story so it's ok that this didn't really have one, I see what you were trying to do, but I just think it needed more work. Audio like this really isn't easy to edit with, fast tempos require faster movement and that was just lacking a bit here. I think this video would actually be pretty cute if it were fixed up and timed a bit better. I hope you go back and re-edit this because it's something I'd definitely enjoy if it werent for the problems I mentioned earlier, as it is now its quite original for a dance vid unfortunately the editing issues overshadow that a bit
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Re: New K-ON AMV!!

Post by Shui » Sat May 09, 2009 9:51 am

1 ) Daddy DJ Rippoff !
2 ) Animes and music don't fit at all
3 ) Pace of the amv isn't fast enough

Overall a Mediocore fan-amv you'd watch once, then get the song, and delete it afterwards.

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fucking stealing other poeples hard work and claiming it as your own, you guys should be ashemed

ppl fukin fuk spent years making those animes, blood sweat and spilt coffe stains drawing all day long just to get a title "animator: this GUY" and then those music ppl spend years learning to produce music, teams of so many hard working ppl just trying to get their stuff out there in the world then WHAT TEH FUK DO U GUYS DO? u fukin take the drawings, u fukin take the music, then u just slap it fukin together like its fukin nothing, then u make banners and og take credit for it fukin all like u fukin made shit goin amv contests actin liek ur teh fukin shit fukin sayin i amde this fukin liek if u fukin did fukin makin fukin the fukin fukin fukin fukin - MiyaDV (2014)

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Re: New K-ON AMV!!

Post by Megamom » Sat May 09, 2009 12:26 pm

K-ON :up:

I like the series, but this AMV does not have any meaning for me!

2/5 :book:
NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE

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Re: New K-ON AMV!!

Post by ilostart » Sat May 09, 2009 6:56 pm

BurningLeaves wrote:I think this video is moving just too slow for the audio. Scenes are pretty random, playing too long and are pretty far off the flow of the music. Lots of lip flap and missed sync opportunities. A few good moments such as the feet tapping. I think it would have worked if you had cut the song in half and added a third more footage and timed it well. In a dance video you're not really expecting a story so it's ok that this didn't really have one, I see what you were trying to do, but I just think it needed more work. Audio like this really isn't easy to edit with, fast tempos require faster movement and that was just lacking a bit here. I think this video would actually be pretty cute if it were fixed up and timed a bit better. I hope you go back and re-edit this because it's something I'd definitely enjoy if it werent for the problems I mentioned earlier, as it is now its quite original for a dance vid unfortunately the editing issues overshadow that a bit
Thanks for the detailed feedback, now I know what to fix.

I am definitly going to remake it now. It was my first attempt at a amv of this genre. I am probably going to wait till a few more episodes are released before I remake it now that there is interest in a better version.

Made it to experiment and only took about an hour and a half to complete (didn't want to spend a lot of time on the amv till I got some feedback because I am literally working on over 7 different amvs).


I usually spend 4-17 hours of editing for an amv (pure editing).
On some of my non anime fanmade music videos I have spent well over 20 hours finishing - google superdrunkenpenguin for my first video site account and look for Happy Feet + Salt Shaker Extended Remix.
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Re: New K-ON AMV!!

Post by ilostart » Sat May 09, 2009 9:22 pm

Megamom wrote:K-ON :up:

I like the series, but this AMV does not have any meaning for me!

2/5 :book:

What would you like to see different?

I am going to remake it and it will be a lot better than what it is now.
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Re: New K-ON AMV!!

Post by Gidrasan » Sun May 10, 2009 2:24 am

omg... you should spend more time from your project, than 30min... :down:
sorry for my english.... i working on it...

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Re: New K-ON AMV!!

Post by Megamom » Sun May 10, 2009 2:29 pm

ilostart wrote:
Megamom wrote:K-ON :up:

I like the series, but this AMV does not have any meaning for me!

2/5 :book:

What would you like to see different?

I am going to remake it and it will be a lot better than what it is now.
OK ... music,

I like electronic music, but I think K-ON is the best Rock, preferably be female vocalist like Edening! |:>
NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE

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Re: New K-ON AMV!!

Post by ilostart » Mon May 11, 2009 11:10 am

Megamom wrote:
ilostart wrote:
Megamom wrote:K-ON :up:

I like the series, but this AMV does not have any meaning for me!

2/5 :book:

What would you like to see different?

I am going to remake it and it will be a lot better than what it is now.
OK ... music,

I like electronic music, but I think K-ON is the best Rock, preferably be female vocalist like Edening! |:>

Maybe. Just thought of some rap songs I could put this too and make a parody with...
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