second amv: Bleach in the dark room

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second amv: Bleach in the dark room

Post by RadicalRuggy » Sat Jan 10, 2009 6:01 am

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I took 2 weeks working two hours every evening for two hours.

in this bleach amv, the final battle between ichigo and grimmjow, I introduce the Dark sky effect ( I played a lot with the chromakeyer )and the distorted sky....

in this video I 've made practice with the music sync and also a bit of lip sync

the song is by bullet for my valentine (room 409)

in that period I was very sad -_-

anime: bleach




enjoy ^^

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Re: second amv: Bleach in the dark room

Post by 95shiruka » Sat Jan 10, 2009 9:24 am

good job Ruggy^^
you have done a great chroma keying :mrgreen:

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Re: second amv: Bleach in the dark room

Post by Neverend » Sat Jan 10, 2009 10:23 am

Bad encode
Bad sync
Bad effort
Bad fx
Bad originality
Bad sound input

overall a bad amv!

Now that ive been a bitch, i would say you should skip the fx's for your next amv, work on your sync watch some more amv's and maybe read some of the tutorials you have on this site!
gl

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Re: second amv: Bleach in the dark room

Post by RadicalRuggy » Sat Jan 10, 2009 10:42 am

Neverend wrote:Bad encode
Bad sync
Bad effort
Bad fx
Bad originality
Bad sound input

overall a bad amv!

Now that ive been a bitch, i would say you should skip the fx's for your next amv, work on your sync watch some more amv's and maybe read some of the tutorials you have on this site!
gl

-_- thanks

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Re: second amv: Bleach in the dark room

Post by Magnus » Sat Jan 10, 2009 11:07 am

I pretty much agree with Neverend to most part. But I also have to point out the huge filesize.
You should take a look at the guides just like Neverend said.
It has some really detailed instructions on how you prepare and clean your footage as well as encoding.

As for your way of editing, lay low on the effects a bit man. Don't use them until you know what your doing.
Test around with betas and stuff, and when you feel confident about your effects start use them in your full releases.

Video concept-wise was really lame, putting a song to a long fight scene and some really messy looking effects is nothing that usually captures my interest.
In the end I wasn't able to finish the whole video but started to scrub through it, only to see;
Constant (bad) chroma keying, Rapid (also bad) TV Simulators, Portal transitions that was totally out of place and more bad looking Inverts.

It was just like an episode with constant fighting, with different music and more, not to mention choppy, effects added.

But as stated, it is only your second video, and there is still a lot of time for you to improve.
Good luck on future videos.

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Re: second amv: Bleach in the dark room

Post by Gaurry_no_blond » Sat Jan 10, 2009 11:39 am

Neverend wrote:Bad encode
Bad sync
Bad effort
Bad fx
Bad originality
Bad sound input

overall a bad amv!
Gaurry-style critic :mrgreen:
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Re: second amv: Bleach in the dark room

Post by Magnus » Sat Jan 10, 2009 11:44 am

Gaurry_no_blond wrote:
Neverend wrote:Bad encode
Bad sync
Bad effort
Bad fx
Bad originality
Bad sound input

overall a bad amv!
Gaurry-style critic :mrgreen:
Yeah, the critic that isn't really constructive.
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Re: second amv: Bleach in the dark room

Post by RadicalRuggy » Sat Jan 10, 2009 12:28 pm

ZetZu wrote:
Gaurry_no_blond wrote:
Neverend wrote:Bad encode
Bad sync
Bad effort
Bad fx
Bad originality
Bad sound input

overall a bad amv!
Gaurry-style critic :mrgreen:
Yeah, the critic that isn't really constructive.
yeah and if you can explain me better ^^ cuz I've done an other amv...and I want to correct at least my encoding/rendering problem

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Re: second amv: Bleach in the dark room

Post by Neverend » Sun Jan 11, 2009 11:33 pm

Gaurry_no_blond wrote:
Neverend wrote:Bad encode
Bad sync
Bad effort
Bad fx
Bad originality
Bad sound input

overall a bad amv!
Gaurry-style critic :mrgreen:
:ying:

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Re: second amv: Bleach in the dark room

Post by Nunchuck » Mon Jan 12, 2009 9:09 am

I like your poster :ying:
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