Total and utter fail.
Wait...
I should watch it first? I see...
/DLs
Shui wrote:ZOMG
/gets
I'll OP tomorrow
still...

That's a cool doujin... you should've just posted whole page ;<
EDIT: Watched and...
Needs less feathering, seriously. Half of the time I was staring at the stars in the BG, because they were sharp and crispy, YEAH.
But maybe that's just me.
And you could've masked the star corners, when something weird was there, in most cases even with solid colour (like Konata with an arrow, clearly pointing at pink(!) hair (what was the glasses girl name again?) - maybe she could've been there, but it would be better without, I suppose. Or "If you wanna capture me", the part of non-rabbit Kagami is too small and would be better left off.
But that's just me pinpointing stupid thing. Nice work (b^^)b