[Koys] ~Traverse~

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Re: [Koys] ~Traverse~

Post by Koys » Wed Dec 10, 2008 3:10 pm

Thanks :wink:
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Re: [Koys] ~Traverse~

Post by Koopiskeva » Wed Dec 10, 2008 3:36 pm

Good times. :up:
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Re: [Koys] ~Traverse~

Post by jrob156 » Wed Dec 10, 2008 4:54 pm

epic win :up:
yo waz good

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Re: [Koys] ~Traverse~

Post by Infinity Squared » Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:18 pm

I like it. Cousin girl running through dark hallway was the more jarring and out of place moment of the video but it was a few seconds that I could look past. The song predominantly was a happier tone than what was being portrayed by the actual scenes but rather than colide in style, they actually complimented each other. It made the sadder scenes seem sadder, and the lighter music seem more optimistic. Don't know exactly the reasoning behind it but it worked.

One other thing which I may just criticise though would be the photographs. To me it looked like you were trying to go for a polaroid style thing, however I'm used to seeing polaroid pictures in non-widescreen layouts. I don't profess to be an expert on polaroid pictures, but I think for authenticity, it may have paid to make those photos in 4:3 format.

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Re: [Koys] ~Traverse~

Post by Niwa » Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:50 pm

It was nice :)

The amount of masking was a bit overkill though.
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Re: [Koys] ~Traverse~

Post by Cross/fade » Thu Dec 11, 2008 1:32 am

I enjoyed it a lot :up:

The only thing that bothered me a little, was the scene selection stuff. Well, some clips just didnt connect very well with the song.
Still, I can see how much effort you put into this. Good job :up:

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Re: [Koys] ~Traverse~

Post by Dejo510 » Thu Dec 11, 2008 2:08 am

VERY nice...
Although I'll have to agree with Infinity that the polaroid like shots seemed a bit strange being widescreen.

Still, it worked and you pulled it off great.
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Re: [Koys] ~Traverse~

Post by Koys » Thu Dec 11, 2008 6:05 am

For polaroid I found it better like this, and I read bin deceive :sweat:

Thank you all :mrgreen:
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Re: [Koys] ~Traverse~

Post by Sonydjsnmix » Fri Dec 12, 2008 12:14 am

Great song and great editing, but it didn't go together too well for me. The lyric sync was way off for me. Beautiful effects though.

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Re: [Koys] ~Traverse~

Post by Megamom » Fri Dec 12, 2008 9:42 am

This AMV was great, I liked the consepto, good job! 5/5 :up:
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