The Next Iron Man!

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Wolfy2hk
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The Next Iron Man!

Post by Wolfy2hk » Mon Dec 01, 2008 2:51 pm


Even though the movie came out months ago I still wanted to do a trailer parody, when Code Geass finished I wanted to make an amv but couldn't find the right song but then I thought of doing a movie trailer but put the focus on Jeremiah because he is one badass cyborg 8-) , anyways Enjoy!
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Re: The Next Iron Man!

Post by SF_Phoenix » Mon Dec 01, 2008 6:25 pm

Your idea was pretty good for this. Jeremiah fits the role well because of the stuff he goes through.

Technical stuff: Quality looked like it could have been better. And I think I may have seen an AR issue... not sure about that one though.

Editing wise is was pretty good, scenes were pretty well chosen and synced. Your lip sync was ok, but I felt it could be improved.

Overall it was pretty good, but I can't help but feel that it was a bit lacking at points, not quite sure how to explain it =/. Lastly, the Iron Man title at the end looked out of place, since it wasn't animated (that might just be a preference thing for me though)

Not a bad vid though 3.5/5
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Re: The Next Iron Man!

Post by Wolfy2hk » Tue Dec 02, 2008 9:57 pm

thx for the input and yea there was AR issues because some footage was in 4:3 and other 16:9 or widescreen *dont remember anymore* but since movie trailers are in widescreen i just decided to squish, thx for the input again.
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