Sakura vs Ino - Beautiful Liar

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Sakura vs Ino - Beautiful Liar

Post by Sakura_Misukaru » Sun Oct 12, 2008 3:27 pm

This is my first video on a-m-v.org
Please watch my video, i hope you enjoy it :D


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Post by dazza1008 » Mon Oct 13, 2008 12:33 am

I liked the concept, and I also like pop songs. x3

Thought the video worked well since the girls in the song are love rivals. Also liked the beatsync evident in certain parts (like when the girls cut their hair)

To offer some critique, if you're interested in getting the raws (i.e. footage without subtitles) you when you purchase the DVD's legally.

Also, I thought it would have been nice to have seen some shots of Sasuke, since he was the guy they were fighting over. Or could have put that scene where Naruto (disguised as Sasuke) leans in to kiss Sakura when it was Ino's turn in the song to be outraged.

Also, since it's WMV, I'm not sure how you could have compressed it further, but 54megs seems a bit high. Didn't look crappy, though. Maybe you'd like to see the guide here (it talks about compressing to WMV
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/guides/avtech/

But enjoyed it! ^^
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Post by Moonie » Mon Oct 13, 2008 12:46 am

Hey, Dazza, Its good to give links to the guides for help
but don't post links to places to download anime from.
Its against the forum rules.
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/phpBB/v ... .php?t=289
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Post by x_rex30 » Mon Oct 13, 2008 12:51 am

This would do fine on utube but here on this site we hope to see more effort.

The editing was lazy
The visual quality was bad
Too much lip flap
Not much focus on hitting beats or matching mood
subtitles shouldn't be in a video, so please use a source with the fight that doesn't have the subtitles, like the dvd. If you can't afford to do so then try cropping them.

There are guides here on the site that help you with all the present problems in the video.

Don't feel bad or anything, I'm not saying you suck, just telling you there are things you can work on. Watch a few quality videos on this site like try checking out some on the top ten percent. Don't go to utube to find quality videos. I've seen over 100 Naruto videos on that site and not a single one had bellow a 4 star rating so don't even rely on that site to get an idea of how good your video is.

Sorry if this sounds mean, just thought I'd leave feedback and help you out a bit.

If you need any help getting started, you could send me a pm and I can share some info that may help out.

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Post by guy07 » Mon Oct 13, 2008 1:45 am

DO NOT TELL PEOPLE TO DL ANIME FOR FOOTAGE! We're arleady skating on thin ice here, always use bought DVDs for amvs.

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Post by dazza1008 » Mon Oct 13, 2008 2:16 am

Eep! Thanks guys, fixed. XD;;;;; (really, thanks)

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Post by 76 » Mon Oct 13, 2008 10:58 am

Very bad quality and no music sync at all. All you really did was listen to a song whilst watching a portion of an episode.


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Post by Taokato » Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:01 am

guy07 wrote:DO NOT TELL PEOPLE TO DL ANIME FOR FOOTAGE! We're arleady skating on thin ice here, always use bought DVDs for amvs.
thats it (=
but maybe he/she hasn´t got any money? go and buy. Its the best way, and looking a anime on a big HDTV tv is wonderful

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