Nick Izumi's AMV Debut (Char's Counter Attack)

Nick Izumi · Post by **Nick Izumi** » Tue Aug 19, 2008 1:40 am

Hi all, it's a pleasure to meet you. My name is Nick Izumi and this is my fist AMV and I need you're comments and criticism. I don't know how well I did but any tips would be appreciated. Thanks in advance.

Sepvicious · Post by **Sepvicious** » Tue Aug 19, 2008 5:01 pm

Well, you should make more cuts. There were very long passages without any cut especially at the end and the structure of the Story was medium till good.

"Category: Action"? The song and the video were very slow (maybe except the last fight) so it´s heavy to talk about action here.

I hope I could help you. Keep trying^^

PS: Read the Guides at the .org they are very useful

Nick Izumi · Post by **Nick Izumi** » Tue Aug 19, 2008 11:06 pm

Sepvicious wrote:... and the structure of the Story was medium till good.

Thanks, I know I have a long way to go, but I'm not sure what this sentance means. Could you help there?

Sepvicious · Post by **Sepvicious** » Wed Aug 20, 2008 9:27 am

Ok, maybe my English is bad^^ (about 4 years without writing a complete sentence xD)

It should mean that the story in the AMV (the scenes you used and how you composed them) is logically ,fits to the lyrics, makes sense, etc.

I hope it´s better now^^