Cherish The Heavens OMG!!! What an Improvment ;)

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Lordvergil
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Cherish The Heavens OMG!!! What an Improvment ;)

Post by Lordvergil » Thu Jun 05, 2008 3:59 pm

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Hi,

I think that I have just made a major improvment
concerning my first AMV.
I have to thank all of you for giving me such good
hints and tipps without them I wouldn´t have
Improved.

Thanks a lot this AMV was indirectly supported
by you guys ;).

I hope I´ll get a lot of hints and critics again so
that I can Improve even more thanks already ;).

Enjoy !!!

Lordvergil

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Nunchuck
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Post by Nunchuck » Fri Jun 06, 2008 7:23 am

For a second one this feels a lot different then your first amv. You definitely improved, but I think you should have had a better concept. A story or something could be something you should aim for in your next try, because showing me random scenes again is not what I can do again and again. The sync is almost fine the way it is. You used some cool effects even though I don't agree with all of their usefullness I think they are not bad either. Good Job... Keep it up

Nunchuck
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Post by Lordvergil » Fri Jun 06, 2008 12:11 pm

Thank you,

I hoped for a comment like that thanks.

Still I hope someone can tell me what is missing
to make this an impressive or amazing AMV,
because at the moment I´d say its good but
there is something missing and I do not know what ?

Thanks

Lordvergil
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CodeZTM
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Post by CodeZTM » Sat Jun 07, 2008 5:14 pm

*gets out of morbid curiosity to see if I will actually find a good Munto video*

Edit:

Meh. My opinions of this Anime and the genre using this anime has pretty much stayed the same now.

Visuals were average. They weren't as good as Munto could be, but they don't irk me too much. Though every now and then I was hoping for the nice visuals Munto offers.

Editing was atmospheric and worked well with the song, but it really didn't do anything too different. Some of the effects were intergrated well and did a pretty good job with the song, but others were just irritating and needless.

Originality - concerned, this was pretty much like any other AMV in the genre.

But I will give you praise for the song choice, which I found to be a nice refreshing song to add to my repitoir of musical collection.

It really didn't overly impress or dissapoint.
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Post by Lordvergil » Sun Jun 08, 2008 7:28 pm

Thanks,

well at least its not a bad AMV its an avareage one.
Thus Ive Improved ;)

Thanks for support.

Lordvergil
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