Twilight Sky

meleechampion · Post by **meleechampion** » Sat May 24, 2008 4:03 pm

I never got back to you on this, so sorry! I had stuff to say too! Oh well.

/gets (to see what's been changed)

blabbler · Post by **blabbler** » Sat May 24, 2008 6:22 pm

Ingow wrote:i mainly downloaded this because the poster looks like its two guys...

Hang on, I know how to do this one...

nowai!

yes, i think i carried that off.

/gets

edit: damn, man. i can't believe you made a trailer for koop's vid too. i'm going to look really silly when i announce mine

this lacked pink, flowers and lace, but was still pretty cool

SF_Phoenix · Post by **SF_Phoenix** » Sat May 24, 2008 7:08 pm

That was a fast release =O, and it looks like I was really late in giving feedback considering the time I gave it to you o.o

This was a pretty neat idea to use Fruits Basket, and it turned out pretty nice. The car crash scene is kinda awkward here though, but I guess there wasn't too much you could have done about that. and the part where Tohru goes "i'm not scared of you", her mouth seems to have disappeared o.o. It also looks like the outlines are a little fuzzy.

The ending of the video got me a bit mixed up on what you wanted to show, I was expecting to see Kyo in his monster form at that point.

Overall, I really liked the idea of this =), especially the part where it looks like he stares down Yuki =P, but I do feel you could have done a better job on some of the other parts.

3.75/5

oh and you put an additional "n" in my name in the vid profile =)

Autraya · Post by **Autraya** » Sun May 25, 2008 8:10 pm

you made me google "twilight" >.<;

will get this... sooon

Fizziks · Post by **Fizziks** » Sun May 25, 2008 11:15 pm

I have to agree with others who have commented that the car crash part seemed a little out of place. However, I still thought that this was a well done trailer overall. Good work!

JaddziaDax · Post by **JaddziaDax** » Mon May 26, 2008 3:35 pm

now that i think of it.... aren't there scenes of her mother's car crash? you could have used some panning on the still frames or flashes to the various stills of it or made it look more dramatic... perhaps?

Megamom · Post by **Megamom** » Tue May 27, 2008 12:35 pm

Excelente trabajo 5/5