hey Myrmi
First great job on doing something like that with moviemaker. This is quiet a decent job if you consider what program you used to make the video. I don't speak nor understand the lyrics of the song, so it was quiet hard to follow what you were trying to do with it. I also couldn't figure out how the anime you used were connected... What suprised me the most was that I actually watched it through even though I couldn't make up a story or a meaning of the song and pictures you have showed me. I would if I were you try to get something going in your AMV. Something I can even understand without reading the translated lyrics. I'll definitely not keep this amv, because I have got no clue what you did...
The stuff you did with the voices of the characters of the anime was nice. I liked it, because it seemed to fit. What I didn't like though and that can be fixed really easily was the aspect ratio you used and the technical issues you had. The quality of the amv is suprisingly well for a .wmv encode, but it can be better (blablabla^^) I guess if you read the guides on the side to get a better visual quality you'll be just fine for your next try
Good Job. Nunchuck