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mirkosp
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Post by mirkosp » Tue Apr 29, 2008 7:48 am

This was awesome, perfect storytelling, good flow. A keeper indeed. The only thing I didn't like was the random flying cake at 01:21, felt out of place... but that's the only thing that I can fault in the whole amv. :lol:
Again, good job, man, the masks and the transitions were very well executed and fitting, definitely going to check out your next works. :up:

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Post by Kevmaster » Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:31 am

I got this, because I remembered liking your first Video.

But Sadly, I didn't really like this Video here too much, I'm not a friend of the effect work in this video, nor did it really interest me at all, especially in the beginning part it was very choppy also and didn't seem to flow with the music at all. The Quality was also pretty lousy for a Kanon Video.

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Post by Niwa » Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:54 am

That was pretty neat O: I liked those transitions sometimes but some of the masking was a bit odd though. I wasn't too fond of the music since it didn't really fit the source most of the time.

Looking forward to ur next work :up:
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Post by x_rex30 » Tue Apr 29, 2008 9:57 am

From the beginning to 00:43 I did not like the effects that much or the choice of scenes. The effects felt like Stuart Larkin. From 00:43 to 1:09 you match the intensity and emotion just right. Even the way you used the effects were nice. I don't have much to complain here.

The lip sync was annoying at 1:09

Effects after this and the high intensity parts in the song you match extremely well. Except how you did the cake scene was kinda weird.

So most parts seemed very nice while the other parts I mentioned I didn't like. Not all consistent, but it's forgiving when you have really good edits in this video that really grab my attention.

Since I like most of it and really liked your mood sync on a lot of parts(other parts, not so much), I give it a 4 out of 5.

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