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Post by simofc90 » Mon Apr 07, 2008 1:14 pm

first :O

That's realy good! Generaly good atmosphere and effects.
4,5/5
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Post by mirkosp » Mon Apr 07, 2008 1:16 pm

/gets based on simofc90's suggestion. :D

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Post by Bauzi » Mon Apr 07, 2008 1:22 pm

rrrrrr. This song wants me to get this vid. I... can´t... resist oO
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Post by Flo' » Mon Apr 07, 2008 1:23 pm

simofc90 wrote:first :O

That's realy good! Generaly good atmosphere and effects.
4,5/5
x2 :up:
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Post by mirkosp » Mon Apr 07, 2008 1:54 pm

Well, it was good, but it kinda reminded me of project relic and spoil for some reason... also I think that the AR is wrong...
But overall it was good, I think 4/5. ;)

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Post by Brad » Mon Apr 07, 2008 9:31 pm

Everything was going fine for me up until 01:48 when the little audio viz dealie popped up in the top right. It was distracting and didn't seem to serve any real purpose.

Other than that, pretty solid video. Keep it up.
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Post by Serv0 » Mon Apr 07, 2008 10:46 pm

Damn...
...did I zone out on this one.

I'm sorry but I was turned off at exactly 15 secs into the vid.

I guess I'll give you credit with the synch visual to music thingy.
Other than that, my interest level is sleeping with the fishes.

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Post by Bauzi » Tue Apr 08, 2008 10:00 am

Editing: Eh... Just another KARAS-action amv. Nothing new or exciting.


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00:04
I like your logo. Looks good for me.

00:10
Begining it self. meh... Boring beat sync. I could live without it.

00:22
Mhm not bad. The wall at the background seams to be out of place for me. I would be happier with simpel grunge style textures.

00:39
Why can I see the wall? The picture should fill the whole border!!!

00:43
The use of fractal noise is just too simpel here and unatractive for me.

00:55
... with the change of colours it gets a bit better.

01:28
Eh =/ The whole audio thing could be composed much better. I´m really not happy with the stuff you have here.

01:50
Yuk! The use of fractal noise is bad at this scene. To move the filth doesn´t make it better.
The audiobar looks too simpel for me. The integration could be much better.

02:20
What the? You come up with more complex composition and you "dare" to put in such a plain thing? This was really no good for the video. There is a (I think so) tutorial for something similar at creativecow.com
This little thing doesn´t really have a purpose.

02:35
The text is a bit to unsharp for me around the edges.


Ah it´s a beginning for using more complex effects, but sometimes you just went to simpel with them. Work on the integration. However it´s not bad. 3.75/5
Keep it up or something and improve at some things.
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Post by Kaxi » Tue Apr 08, 2008 4:51 pm

Nice stuff, not bad compared to the time you spent on it. Although i do think the level of the audio volume changes a bit here and there, and i don't like the counting part, but that aside yeah, cool video.
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