The beginning could have been done much more interessting for me. More custom tech-style?
The second half with the comosition was nice, but there were to things that bugged me:
-To much motion to the riffs. I would be happier with less.
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Even if you´re not able to fix the gaps in your effect program you could have fix this little things afterwards with simpel drawings on the frames. Wouldn´t be that hard.
In this state they´re just to obvious and distracting.
Anyway it´s nice. 4/5