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Post by yumiche » Thu Feb 07, 2008 5:06 am

Hi there guys ^_^

this is my first post here :P

ok here it goes..

AMV: NANA
Anime: NANA
Song: Passed away by Avril
Duration: 03:41
Filesize: 35.38 MB

by the way.. in the credits my name is yumi (since someone else took the name, i couldn't chose it while regestring in the forum)

i really hope you like it.. i couldn't finish this amv in one day since it was so emotional doing it T_T
I love this anime

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Post by Pherphq » Thu Feb 07, 2008 1:52 pm

hmm not bad kinda slow , random display I recommend ya not make this is a wmv and provide more scenes for better flow 2.5/5

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Post by yumiche » Fri Feb 08, 2008 8:01 am

just asking.. but have u watched the anime be4?

about the amv.. i guss it's slow because the song is slow :?
for the random display, i think there was 2 mistakes in the amv.. it's really hard using the WMM.. but i tride to make the scene go with the song as much as i can..

anyhow thank you for the reply.. i will try harder in my next one ^_^

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Post by Kionon » Fri Feb 08, 2008 8:10 am

No, this is definitely too slow. I have seen the anime. In fact it is in my top ten.

Your flow is still too slow even for this video. You stay on several scenes too long. And there are points where the audio does speed up quite a bit, and you don't follow it.

I would suggest this song as definite reason to use more overlays.

I like the concept, I just think it could be much better executed.
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Post by yumiche » Fri Feb 08, 2008 11:08 am

hmm..
i guss if two ppl says it's slow.. then maybe it's really slow..
i will try harder next time to make it more intersting..
thanx for the reply.. ^_^

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Post by Pherphq » Fri Feb 08, 2008 11:48 am

yumiche wrote:just asking.. but have u watched the anime be4?

about the amv.. i guss it's slow because the song is slow :?
for the random display, i think there was 2 mistakes in the amv.. it's really hard using the WMM.. but i tride to make the scene go with the song as much as i can..

anyhow thank you for the reply.. i will try harder in my next one ^_^
I never seen the anime and it's not slow cause of the song it's slow cause of the scenes for sync in this amv try to get use to the guides here if ya read it for better compression , video quality, and the right format other than wmv

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Post by yumiche » Fri Feb 08, 2008 12:00 pm

I never seen the anime and it's not slow cause of the song it's slow cause of the scenes for sync in this amv try to get use to the guides here if ya read it for better compression , video quality, and the right format other than wmv
so is .avi better than .wmv? or should i use another formating?

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Post by Nunchuck » Fri Feb 08, 2008 3:20 pm

It was a quiet decent AMV considering that it was your first try editing. You could get my interest in the anime and keep me watching to the end. On what you really have to work on is your music sync. You missed so many beats and the slow parts had sometimes more scene changes than the fast parts of the music. All in all though it was pretty nicely done :wink:

I guess the most user in the org like .mp4 a lot :)
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Post by Kionon » Fri Feb 08, 2008 9:02 pm

yumiche wrote:
I never seen the anime and it's not slow cause of the song it's slow cause of the scenes for sync in this amv try to get use to the guides here if ya read it for better compression , video quality, and the right format other than wmv
so is .avi better than .wmv? or should i use another formating?
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Post by CodeZTM » Fri Feb 08, 2008 10:58 pm

You know, I really do like slow AMV's. I really do! Like the guys above stated, it was just a tad too slow. (Then again, I have had this same problem when I first started out, so I realize how you feel.... X_X)

You need to learn how to sync your videos better. It's not all that hard either! Just look for a change in musical pace to make a split in video. Heck, even throw in a digital effect or transition to make it smoother.

Anyway, for a first video, it was pretty well above what we usually get around here, so I'm proud of you for that! ^_^

Oh, and I highly suggest MP4 compression. File size is low, quality is high, and it's relatively simple to execute.

If you have any questions, feel free to ask me via pm. I suggest reading Kionon's guide, as it is very benificial to ANY editor. ^_^

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