In The Light

-Reda- · Post by **-Reda-** » Sat Feb 02, 2008 2:43 am

Agree with most of whats been said so far. Only thing I really have to add to it is be careful you don't over edit. You seem to be showing a bit more scenes than you need to per beat, instead of using 3 clips use 2 or even 1 with some synced movement or something rather than a scene change. Makes it harder to focus on whats going on when you're changing scenes too fast for the viewer to really absorb what you're showing them. This was pretty good though, you had some nice scene selection, decent enough focus, although it seemed to wander or lapse at times....

I'd give this a nice 3/5 and recommend that people watch it.

Nunchuck · Post by **Nunchuck** » Sat Feb 02, 2008 5:56 am

I thought it was kind of boring in the beginning and then gotten way better towards the end. There's nothing wrong with your editing style. That's not what I'm saying, but the music was just putting me to sleep at first. When the action started I was like... aahhhh finally^^ the interessting part is starting

4/5

dreamawake · Post by **dreamawake** » Sat Feb 02, 2008 9:19 am

Thanks for the comments guys, glad you all seem to like it ^__^

blabbler · Post by **blabbler** » Sat Feb 02, 2008 9:20 am

WoO. Real music!

Disagree with Nunchuck, I enjoyed the build up.
I love the song choice though; now, if you'd used johnny cash or john lee hooker for the credits, it would've been perfect.

dreamawake · Post by **dreamawake** » Sat Feb 02, 2008 9:20 am

blabbler wrote:WoO. Real music!

Disagree with Nunchuck, I enjoyed the build up.
I love the song choice though; now, if you'd used johnny cash or john lee hooker for the credits, it would've been perfect.

\m/

>.o

DayWalker B. · Post by **DayWalker B.** » Sat Feb 02, 2008 9:27 am

Yeah, I actually liked this. The flow was pretty great overall and I liked the mixture of action and calmer stuff, as well as the atmosphere of this vid. The visual appearance could've been better and some parts, I thought, could've been edited differently. But still, good job on this vid man, loved the song choice. I enjoyed it.

Kevmaster · Post by **Kevmaster** » Sat Feb 02, 2008 2:26 pm

Nice ^_^

Unlimited Rice · Post by **Unlimited Rice** » Sat Feb 02, 2008 3:14 pm

Oh, I see you actually finished it.

I'm not so hyped about the Superbowl this year. Giants vs Pats? Meh.

XTRMNTR2K · Post by **XTRMNTR2K** » Sat Feb 02, 2008 3:24 pm

A really great video!

There's almost nothing left to add anymore. As has been said before, try to keep down the number of scenes just a little bit. Other than that, it's perfect.

4/5

dreamawake · Post by **dreamawake** » Sat Feb 02, 2008 7:03 pm

Unlimited Rice wrote:Oh, I see you actually finished it.

I'm not so hyped about the Superbowl this year. Giants vs Pats? Meh.

Iknorite? No Eagles, what a travesty =(