OMFG a FANSUB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

if ur gonna torrent the anime which ur gonna use try to get a good quality RAW....i dont care if u use torrents but alot of people on this site do so i recommend you get some dvds. Also the video itself was really...bleh. It was really hard to watch. The scenes were so randomly selected i got confused as to what u were trying to create. u should work a little more on ur storytelling if the video had one. Also I kinda had a feeling it was a torrent...but dont give it away by changing the aspect ratio to show the subs, also dont cut the audio at a bad spot to allow the characters to speak.
The things u synced to...try to keep them to a minimum because u synced to too many things and it made messy. Also u need to work on ur flow because it was very choppy. I hope i didn't come off as too mean and if u work on the things i mentioned you'll improve
