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a first video attempt

Post by gravegun » Thu Sep 27, 2007 10:31 pm

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=150762

this is my first amv if anyone has advice give it to me :D.
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Post by NS » Thu Sep 27, 2007 10:32 pm

Post a link

/advice

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Post by gravegun » Thu Sep 27, 2007 10:35 pm

:lol: you read the post before i had the chance to edit it xD owell now watch the vid and be semi-amazed

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Post by NS » Thu Sep 27, 2007 10:42 pm

Sure, why the hell not...

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Re: a first video attempt

Post by Autraya » Thu Sep 27, 2007 10:46 pm

gravegun wrote: this is my first amv if anyone has advice give it to me :D.
there is more to life than naruto...
new banzors in the making :p

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Post by gravegun » Thu Sep 27, 2007 10:54 pm

yes whats so wrong with naruto? give advice refering to the video naruto is my second completed series(first tenchi muyo) i like making videos off of my completed series xD even though this is my first vid :O

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Post by Pas » Thu Sep 27, 2007 11:01 pm

gravegun wrote:yes whats so wrong with naruto?
Don't even go there my friend...

/advice

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Post by Moonie » Thu Sep 27, 2007 11:03 pm

Nothings wrong with Naruto
There are just some people that see it alot and consider it overused
If you like using it, then do it
What matters most is that you like the sources you are using.
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Post by Autraya » Thu Sep 27, 2007 11:07 pm

oh all the people that make up the 13,417 naruto vids here think it's great that doesn't take into account the 100,000 odd on Youtube. Of all of them there are 12 good ones...
you asked for advice... I gave you some, in a nutshell it's been done to death from every conceivable angle (stealing someones words here)and it's still being done, seeing a naruto vid turns most people off these days... by all means though continue making narutard vids just don't expect rave reviews :amv:
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Post by NS » Thu Sep 27, 2007 11:08 pm

There have definately been worse First vids.

Advice: Don't just randomly switch the songs you're using.. just like, in the middle of the video. If you're gonna go for the multiple song approach, then at least make the transitions between songs smooth.

as for your video editing, you didn't really make any of the big noob mistakes or anything. You didn't whore effects... In fact the only effect I noticed you used was Bump map.. but at the same time, Bump map isn't that great of an effect, and the way you used it served absolutely no purpose to the vid..therefore did not fit.

First song:.. idk, was boring.. you didn't really seem to fit with the song all that much

Second song: Your action synch was more solid here.. but this song was heavier..and faster, and you still had the Video moving rather slowly.

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