Fullmetal Alchemist - Re-Written

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Fullmetal Alchemist - Re-Written

Post by paul375 » Tue Nov 10, 2009 3:02 am

Hello.
I thought I would share my recently completed AMV.
I created it to enter into the Auckland Armageddon Expo AMV contest (In New Zealand), where it achieved 4th place.
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This was my first time using After Effects (V.5) for something other than playing around. I think there are a couple of scenes that could have been better utilized but overall I am happy with it.

Thank you for your time. I am happy to hear some feedback and I understand that I am not a match for the top AMV artists yet.

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Re: Fullmetal Alchemist - Re-Written

Post by ilaggood » Tue Nov 17, 2009 5:58 pm

Hey Nice Work!
I`m looking for your next work.

Cheers*

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Re: Fullmetal Alchemist - Re-Written

Post by eradicati0n » Sun Nov 22, 2009 12:51 am

Freaking tasty work man! Awesome effects. Keep it up!

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Re: Fullmetal Alchemist - Re-Written

Post by Mol » Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:40 pm

not so bad it's certainly a bit different fma amv, but you should work on storytelling and some more cool sync would fix it up also that sound waves effect wasn't necessary ;) 3/5
Still better than that MMO.
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Re: Fullmetal Alchemist - Re-Written

Post by Kaream » Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:53 pm

it's ok, i felt some effects were uneeded, i like the song though gets me in the feeling .-.

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Re: Fullmetal Alchemist - Re-Written

Post by paul375 » Wed Nov 25, 2009 6:52 pm

Thanks for the comments everyone.

I approach editing from a technical point of view more than story telling. Spend quite a bit of time working on videos to get the look right.
I am trying to work on my lack of creativity and ability to come up with interesting stories. Though next I am going to try a dance / fun type video. I have always like that type but never actually made one.

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Re: Fullmetal Alchemist - Re-Written

Post by Enigma » Wed Nov 25, 2009 6:57 pm

I really didn't like this at all. Sorry :down: ,Better luck next time.

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