Fat Man Swings: Paprika & Skeleton Key

[HanoFist]

I was surprised to find no AMVs to Skeleton Key anywhere on the org. They're a great (if obscure) band. This song and Paprika made a perfect match.

It's my first AMV, so please let me know how I did.

[Ileia]

Not bad for a first video. A lot of the lyric synch was pretty good, mostly in the verses, but the scene changes were a bit abrupt. Just work on your flow a bit in some spots. I can see who you were trying to make the video about, but you used a lot of other scenes that didn't make sense/had little or nothing to do with him. Makes the video hard to follow. I understand how little footage there is, so I can see you were working with what you had.

Anyway, don't be discouraged, just keep editing.

[HanoFist]

Thank you for the constructive ideas. I see that my focus drifted to more general scenes especially when I didn't have lyrics to match. I'll try to keep a more unified theme in mind next time.