Too Far Away From You

Rusher985 · Post by **Rusher985** » Sat Aug 25, 2007 1:32 pm

Hello all ^^
First sorry if I do mistake my english is too bad

I post for the first time one of my AMV here,
Becareful my vidéo is very "gnan gnan" so you're informed...
it is the history of two lovers who live far away one of the other ,they live long itineraries, the lack of the other and the wait ...
Thanks for watch it

(copy and paste of my AMV's comment ^^)

Vidéo: Too Far Away From You
Category: Romance,Sentimental,Serious
Anime: 5 Centimeters per Second
Song: Far Away
Artist: Nickelback
Creator: Rusher

Emong · Post by **Emong** » Sat Aug 25, 2007 2:27 pm

I have a good feeling about this AMV. Just downloading it at the moment

I'll put some comment on it later on.

EDIT: Wait, was this your first video or just the first time you posted a video here on the org?

Anyway, that was very pretty!

I don't think I have much to complain about.. One major thing though. While the mood sync was pretty good and the way you captured this song was very atmospheric, I don't think you captured your concept properly. If this is about two lovers living far away from each other, where was the distance? O.o I felt like the other half of this video was missing.

Your sync and timing were pretty much right on, but some transitions felt a bit akward and too hasty. Maybe it's just the matter of getting used to it, but I took a notice on those issues immediately when I started watching this. But the overall flow was really nice and the transition effects you put there worked like they should, imo.

I expect this video to grow on me from now on

Maybe it's going to end up as one of my 100 favourites sooner or later?.. Good job! Keep on editing such awesome stuff. Oh, and enjoy your stay on the org

4/5

EDIT #2: Wooops, deffinitely not a first vid. Should have checked your profile first..

CrackTheSky · Post by **CrackTheSky** » Sat Aug 25, 2007 4:10 pm

I like what I'm hearing from Emong...

/gets

CodeZTM · Post by **CodeZTM** » Sat Aug 25, 2007 4:21 pm

Damn it! I was going to edit another AMV using this exact same song! Now my idea is totally been raped.

But I'll check it out anyway, due to Emong's words of praise.

CrackTheSky · Post by **CrackTheSky** » Sun Aug 26, 2007 3:01 am

Yeah, that was awesome, but I pretty much agree with everything Emong said. The second half did not convey the same feeling of longing/distance that the song did, and as such didn't have that emotional tug it could have. Also, I really hate Nickelback, so I won't be rewatching this too much.

Still though, for a first video this is outstanding

4/5

- Kael · Post by **- Kael** » Sun Aug 26, 2007 1:03 pm

Yosh Rusher!

Your best amv in the date, you progress well, continue like that !

4/5
*Go to smoke*

CodeZTM · Post by **CodeZTM** » Sun Aug 26, 2007 8:16 pm

Well, since my concept of the video using this same song is different, I think I can still pull it off.

I agree with CrackTheSky and Emong.

^_^

4.00/5.00

Niwa · Post by **Niwa** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 11:16 am

Loved the atmosphere around this video

The transition was quite hasty sometimes like emong mentioned and the mood sync and timing was pretty good.

Good job

Rusher985 · Post by **Rusher985** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 7:59 pm

first,thanks all for your comment !

-Emong
my AMV, I think, can be cut in three parties:

-first one minutes with the "interminable" trip of the man where I tried to make feel the long distance which separated them and pain to wait
-the left segonde is long in my AMV but short for figure, it are together only one night...
I wished that this party lasts because I live this at the moment so it is the party the most important for me

-third and last party is very short because rather painful for me and the stage of goodbyes

I tried to make feel this distance by stressing trip and fact that they stay only only night together
afterwards I agree with you for some violent transition which breaks ambience...

-CrackTheSky
desolate to have made you listen nikelback to still have you of ears? xD

-Kael_
Hey Kael !
thank you for your compliments ^^
Stop to smoke !!!!! xD

-CodeChrono
sorry for your plan

thx for your comment

-Niwa-kun
thank you for having looked at my AMV and have given your opinion!

Magnus · Post by **Magnus** » Tue Aug 28, 2007 9:03 am

Hmmm, I'll take a look

/gets

EDIT: Yea it was good, a bit too fast in the transitions sumtimes as niwa said. also I saw sum speed ups that kinda bugged me. at sum parts the atmosphere could been a bit better. over all a really good vid I enjoyed it. 4/5