Chuunibyou Demo Koi Ga Shitai - Here I Am [AMV]

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Sword Art Online - Saturday Night [AMV]

Post by Joy's AMV » Fri Dec 04, 2015 5:34 am



Hi guys! Hope you like it! This anime is sooooo cute! :oops: ENJOY! |:> :bear:

[Merged with previous announcement. As per the AMV Announcement Forum rules, you may only make one new thread per week. Multiple videos may be announced in the same thread. Thanks! - Ileia]
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Re: Chuunibyou Demo Koi Ga Shitai - Here I Am [AMV]

Post by CrackTheSky » Sat Dec 05, 2015 11:56 am

I kinda liked this. The editing was decent, but what really took me out of it was the horrible color manipulation that was going on all throughout the video...why not just use the source footage without making any changes? It looks washed out and the visual quality suffers hugely. There's no consistency and it just looks bad. Also, the watermark in the lower right corner is a big no-no. Really distracting and unnecessary.

I did like the energy, and it had a great mood/feel to it, but it just was visually really ugly and I couldn't get into it nearly as much as I'd have liked.

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Re: Chuunibyou Demo Koi Ga Shitai - Here I Am [AMV]

Post by Kireblue » Sat Dec 05, 2015 12:29 pm

For both of your videos, I feel that they could have used just a little bit more focus and moderation in terms of effects. I think that they both had good song choices but could have had a stronger narrative and connection to it if you had focused harder on specific characters. Also, I feel that they both overused their effects a bit. The color alteration in your "Here I am" video was a bit too much, and it didn't really add anything to the video. I think that just keeping the natural colors of the anime would have better. An in terms of your "Saturday Night" AMV, I feel that you overused the film gain effect. Using a single effect for an entire video is usually bad idea (especially that effect). If you had limited it to just a specific portion of the AMV to highlight a particularly important flashback, it would have had a more meaningful effect. But overall, your sync wasn't bad :up: . I think that the preview option for your "Here I am video" may be messed up though. I had to watch it on youtube because the preview on the org kept playing at 2x speed (not sure if it just me).

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Re: Chuunibyou Demo Koi Ga Shitai - Here I Am [AMV]

Post by Ileia » Sat Dec 05, 2015 12:34 pm

kireblue wrote: I think that the preview option for your "Here I am video" may be messed up though. I had to watch it on youtube because the preview on the org kept playing at 2x speed (not sure if it just me).
I just checked it and got the same. I put it through to re-encode, so we'll see if that fixes it.
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Re: Chuunibyou Demo Koi Ga Shitai - Here I Am [AMV]

Post by Joy's AMV » Sat Dec 12, 2015 4:57 am

Thank you for your comments and your opinions! They are very helpful and I appreciate! I am still at the beginning but I will try to improve myself! :) Thanks again!
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