The Sky Becomes A Dream

AntaresHeart07 · Post by **AntaresHeart07** » Fri Oct 02, 2015 6:20 am

I finished Magi some days ago and I wanted to edit something about it! I hope you like my work

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Radical_Yue · Post by **Radical_Yue** » Fri Oct 02, 2015 12:32 pm

Incredibly smooth editing but I'm sad with the lack of attention paid to the song. The trio smiling and flying on a magic carpet isn't exactly "wasting away" and it's hard to get a sense of exactly what they're fighting for with the heavy use of intro and random action. A depressing Alibaba profile could have possibly worked though considering all the hell that poor kid goes through. Great editing but I feel it missed it's mark.

AntaresHeart07 · Post by **AntaresHeart07** » Sun Oct 04, 2015 11:44 am

Yeah you are right, I didn't follow the lyrics of the song, I edited too random XD Thanks a lot for your feedback anyway!!

Mol · Post by **Mol** » Mon Oct 05, 2015 2:49 pm

Hehe , yeah lyrics couuld use some love ;3 Decent editing , but it felt a bit too disjointed near end maybe cause of lyrics

AntaresHeart07 · Post by **AntaresHeart07** » Thu Oct 08, 2015 11:51 am

thanks for your feedback!

Shin-AMV · Post by **Shin-AMV** » Thu Oct 08, 2015 2:56 pm

Good technical editing for the most part. I agree with the others that some more emphasis to the lyrics would have really amped it up though, but good nonetheless.

AntaresHeart07 · Post by **AntaresHeart07** » Sat Oct 10, 2015 3:07 am

thank you Shin for your feedback

Xophilarus · Post by **Xophilarus** » Sat Oct 10, 2015 3:22 am

I enjoyed watching it. I agree the lyrics could have been paid more attention to, especially in the verses, in the heavy action parts it wasnt really much of an issue for me. The editing itself though, is really nice ^^ The transitions work a lot more often than not, and the sync is also pretty solid. Nice job ^^

AntaresHeart07 · Post by **AntaresHeart07** » Sat Oct 10, 2015 4:17 am

thanks a lot for your comment!!

CrackTheSky · Post by **CrackTheSky** » Wed Oct 14, 2015 7:07 pm

Allow me to voice the opposite of what everyone else has been saying; as someone who is completely unfamiliar with the anime, I had no problems with your choice to pretty much ignore the lyrics. For fast-paced action videos like this it's pretty much expected, and while I do prefer it when videos pay close attention to the lyrics, in certain cases I can overlook it and I think this was one of those times. I think the video works perfectly well as a straight-up action video; the editing is what's on display here and you did well. Good, high-octane fun

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