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Dotted Lines

Post by slimed » Fri Sep 05, 2014 10:15 pm

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Re: Dotted Lines

Post by Paura » Sat Sep 06, 2014 11:31 pm

:O That was an interesting choice in song to use for that series. I liked it! I also noticed you cut back on the overlays, and I'm proud of you for it. It really makes your amazing sense of sync shine!

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Re: Dotted Lines

Post by Mr. Fuzzyflippers » Sun Sep 07, 2014 2:35 am

I love it. Your flow is amazing :up:

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Re: Dotted Lines

Post by slimed » Tue Sep 09, 2014 2:21 pm

Pauratagashi22 wrote::O That was an interesting choice in song to use for that series. I liked it! I also noticed you cut back on the overlays, and I'm proud of you for it. It really makes your amazing sense of sync shine!

PS: Amaterasu told me to say "Senpai pls notice me"
thank you so much paura :D
Amaterasu wrote:I love it. Your flow is amazing :up:
sankyuuuu <3


also thank you for the critique @ QCer
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Re: Dotted Lines

Post by CrackTheSky » Tue Sep 09, 2014 3:30 pm

I love your editing in this but I can't stand the anime source you used. I haven't seen the show so I'm not commenting on it in that sense, I just don't think it works well for AMVs, at least not in the few videos I've seen that use it. When all the dramatic tension comes from people sliding cards across the floor...it just looks comical, not serious. That, and the scene selection was really same-y...the second half of the video was just shots of characters dramatically playing a card game.

Apply this same editing to this same song with a different anime source and the video would be awesome.

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Re: Dotted Lines

Post by NotFound404 » Wed Sep 10, 2014 10:52 am

Nice effects, I don't like this kind of music, but it works and the video is still enjoyable.
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Re: Dotted Lines

Post by Bollocks » Wed Sep 10, 2014 2:17 pm

Dug the build, but it got super repetitive after the drop.
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Re: Dotted Lines

Post by Replay Studios » Thu Sep 11, 2014 4:03 am

nice ^^

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Re: Dotted Lines

Post by slimed » Sat Sep 13, 2014 6:44 pm

CrackTheSky wrote:I love your editing in this but I can't stand the anime source you used. I haven't seen the show so I'm not commenting on it in that sense, I just don't think it works well for AMVs, at least not in the few videos I've seen that use it. When all the dramatic tension comes from people sliding cards across the floor...it just looks comical, not serious. That, and the scene selection was really same-y...the second half of the video was just shots of characters dramatically playing a card game.

Apply this same editing to this same song with a different anime source and the video would be awesome.
thank you! yeah, i can understand how it might look to someone that hasn't watched the source. though i think it could work well for amvs in that sense, not particularly here, but if the focus were to be story rather than action/karuta. i appreciate the feedback. :)
NotFound404 wrote:Nice effects, I don't like this kind of music, but it works and the video is still enjoyable.
thank you!
MouseBollocks wrote:Dug the build, but it got super repetitive after the drop.
thank you for the comment!
Replay Studios wrote:nice ^^
thanks Replay! :shark:
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