Black Rock Shooter - Razors Out

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Black Rock Shooter - Razors Out

Post by Pic4 » Sun Mar 18, 2012 5:51 am



Hey there,

this is my second AMV done with Sony Vegas. After my first try (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Aph9K3Vlg4I) I decided to make a BRS AMV. Now I used a song without relations to the anime. Next time I try to get Adobe After Effects for more quallity effects. Please give me some constructive comments/opinions and tell me what is wrong with it and how it could be made better.

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Re: Black Rock Shooter - Razors Out

Post by Pic4 » Wed Mar 21, 2012 2:36 pm

New version added with more effects. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vKkm1XVpcdU
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Re: Black Rock Shooter - Razors Out

Post by Pic4 » Sat Mar 24, 2012 11:32 am

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Re: Black Rock Shooter - Razors Out

Post by Ijexis » Sat Mar 24, 2012 12:35 pm

Not bad, a nice sense of atmosphere but I kind of got distracted by the logo in the upper right and the hugely unnecessary lens flare. Keep it up though.
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