Naruto Dumbed Down + 2 others

[dazza1008]

Well, I wouldn't exactly say this is 'good' editing (yeah, yeah - a Naruto vid with mediocre editing, who would've thought?), but it's meant to be a bit of fun, and a tribute to the Sasuke/Itachi fight.

It's not worth a download because it's so short, so please preview if anything!




And here's two more AMVs - which I'd consider better-made compared to "Naruto Dumbed Down". They have a simple editing style - no fancy involved effects here. Made both of these because I liked the songs, and thought the anime fit. To be honest, I couldn't think of any effects which would add to the video (and personally, I don't like putting effects in just for the sake of having effects in the video) - so if something springs to mind, please say.






I'm happy to walk through flames as long as I learn something, but please mention a specific part of the video if you're inclined to critique it. It's honestly easier for me to learn that way. After all, I'm here to learn!

Thanks for reading/watching!

[Fall_Child42]

Hey!

I chose to watch the third one, cuz I think that shiny toy guns are neat.

I'll get the two negatives out of the way.
The glows you used to transition from scene to scene I didn't enjoy very much.
The part with the detective, the second verse I thought was really slow and didn't really follow the flow of the music very well.

On the other hand I really liked this video. It was clean fun and had some great stuff going for it. There was some really good internal synch as well as pretty good pacing for the most part. (there was some pretty neat lyric synch in there as well and you didn't slavishly follow it)

I will give a nice
and mark you aribitrary number / arbitrary number.

[dazza1008]

Thanks for the critique, Mr. Dinosaur

The glows you used to transition from scene to scene I didn't enjoy very much.

It's an additive dissolve transition, and I agree that it's quite basic. They weren't what I had imagined for the vid, but I think I'd need good working knowledge of After Effects for that. It's on the list.

The part with the detective, the second verse I thought was really slow and didn't really follow the flow of the music very well.

Personally, I thought there were a few synchy bits like when the girls give the detective the finger, and the "silly boy gonna make you cry" bit. But yeah, 50% of that section is filler. xD

On the other hand I really liked this video. It was clean fun and had some great stuff going for it. There was some really good internal synch as well as pretty good pacing for the most part. (there was some pretty neat lyric synch in there as well and you didn't slavishly follow it)

I will give a nice
and mark you aribitrary number / arbitrary number.

Thanks for taking the time to critique, and glad you enjoyed the spirit of it. Cheers for the points for improvement.