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Post by jade_eyed_angel » Tue May 02, 2006 4:14 pm

Koopiskeva wrote:jade.

that was great.

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omg really?? thanks! XD (i think i almost fell off the chair when i read this... lol)

Strider_Black wrote:that was beautiful. It brought back some good memories. I'll be keeping this video on my pc for a very long time. Thanks for the magical moment.
thanks a lot!! XD



bluetrain - thanks! XD i'm sorry it's yuri free :P
BUT MEP SOON!! SOOOONN!! XD
and r they that often? ^^; lol


Mark - XD, i glomp you! :)


Tormentor wrote:Okay, as for me I mzst say this video was good, although I am not as stunned as the people talking before me. I just read the video-information and now I know why the quality of the video isn't perfect, but still really good. I liked your effect-usage quite a bit (same goes for the masking) though I have to second the ones who didn't like the scatter-effect. As for the story, I was a bit dissapointed I must admit. I have seen the series for more than 4 times and I think you could have done more with the sources. I think the Karen/Maiku aspect starts too late and gives the viedo a strange structure. It seems like he was betraying Mina, but in fact you don't really show a clear-structuresd relationship, as far as I'm concerned.

/me hides

Sorry to say this but some scenes (taken from the same complex) resembled each other too much, at least that's what i think. I know they aren't, but some others might think of them as scene-reusages. I would have liked it more if you had left karen out complpetely (I tried this in my Onegai Twins video..). Still really a good amv, that is a nice add to the videos of this anime.

4/5 (If you want all this more detailed, pm me and I will leave an op).
thanks, glad you liked it enough for a four =P i was gonna leave karen out at first, it was just an idea i suddenly had when i came across that scene when she just shows up so i wanted to try a "more original" angle... well depending on how you look at it. and yea sorry i know a lot of the clips were really similar but the series is soooo short >.< i moved them around as much as possible, that was the best i could get for now ^^
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I think the Karen/Maiku aspect starts too late and gives the viedo a strange structure. It seems like he was betraying Mina
that is actually exactly what he was doing, betraying mina because karen wanted to take him away. the structure is basically first he is with mina, but karen takes him away, and then mina takes him back. if you missed that, it's probably my fault tho ^^; sorry heh
thanks for the detailed comment! XD


KnX - cause i didn't see you yest! =P
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Post by Unlimited Rice » Tue May 02, 2006 4:51 pm

I really really like this video

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Post by shishlik » Tue May 02, 2006 5:50 pm

I'm pretty sure this is youre best AMV yet. good job:)

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Post by jade_eyed_angel » Tue May 02, 2006 5:50 pm

TheUnlimited wrote:I really really like this video
thanks! =D
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Post by jade_eyed_angel » Tue May 02, 2006 5:51 pm

shishlik wrote:I'm pretty sure this is youre best AMV yet. good job:)
thanks a lot =D

and wow i have horrible timing lol
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Post by HorrorPhD » Tue May 02, 2006 5:54 pm

And what number was I in the shatter effect list? lmao :P

Seriously...this is just plain awesome stuff. I think I told you that when you sent me the beta...but I just wanna be sure you know. Very emotional, beautiful song and editing work...I'm very impressed! (well, except for the shatter effect :twisted: )

Overall...extremely sexi. :wink:

Lub,
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Post by jade_eyed_angel » Tue May 02, 2006 5:58 pm

Raven lol you were one of the first 3... u jub and scob, i think you were third ~_^ and i'm up to 7!!! LOL and thanks <3 (and i should seriously change the name to Through the Tears and the Shatter lol)
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Post by amvwizard » Tue May 02, 2006 5:59 pm

Wow that was really cool. Like everyone else said the shatter was the only thing..... but anyway that was really cool I'd give it an 8/10 :D

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Post by jade_eyed_angel » Tue May 02, 2006 6:05 pm

amvwizard wrote:Wow that was really cool. Like everyone else said the shatter was the only thing..... but anyway that was really cool I'd give it an 8/10 :D
thanks and person 8 :D
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Post by Mamo! » Tue May 02, 2006 6:28 pm

You already saw my opinion for this, but anyway, I loved it! :P Nicely done.

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