Tearing Apart - Ichiban Japan Expo 08: Judges choice winner!

Feedback on cataloged Anime Music Videos

Moderators: Mol, seasons

Forum rules
Please observe the following unique rules for this forum:
  • Please limit your new threads (not replies) to one per week. If you have several new videos to announce, create one thread for all the videos. (Note: if you forget one you can edit your post!)
  • Offsite links are allowed, but you are required to have a catalog entry for that video as well. Threads announcing videos that do not contain a catalog entry will be moved to the Awaiting Catalog Entry sub-forum and will be deleted in 2 weeks if an entry is not created.
  • When posting announcements, it is recommended that you include links to the catalog entries (using the video ID) in your post.
  • Videos that do not contain anime are allowed to be announced in the Other Videos section and are not required to have catalog entries.
Locked
User avatar
ExSphere
Joined: Sat Feb 03, 2007 9:43 pm
Org Profile

Re: Tearing Apart - Ichiban Japan Expo 08: Judges choice winner!

Post by ExSphere » Sun Sep 13, 2009 9:22 pm

I absolutely love this song. GETS
Edit

noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
I'm very disapointed with this =( I honestly was not feeling this. I love your begining sequence with the phone and the dark depressing room sequence. That felt right and was excecuted perfectly. But everything after that felt so unsure of itself. Like you didn't have any consitancy with your mood. And all your sources didn't really mix to well with each other. Also there was a scene that got completely butcherd due to some time remapping.
Spoiler :
Maybe it was just me but what was up wtih the ending???? It felt so sour. Like it went from the kid holding the razor blade to his wrist. Then it went black for a good 4 seconds then went to a scene with Ef ( I believe ) and just kinda happily ended O,o Dunno endings are important to me alot <_<
As much as I wanted to enjoy this I really didn't. Sorry man.

User avatar
Magnus
Treasure this time
Joined: Mon Mar 27, 2006 1:40 pm
Status: Extremely Handsome
Location: Sweden
Org Profile

Re: Tearing Apart - Ichiban Japan Expo 08: Judges choice winner!

Post by Magnus » Sun Sep 13, 2009 11:49 pm

Sephirothishere: Thanks.

Neverend: <3 :3
ExSphere wrote:
Spoiler :
Maybe it was just me but what was up wtih the ending???? It felt so sour. Like it went from the kid holding the razor blade to his wrist. Then it went black for a good 4 seconds then went to a scene with Ef ( I believe ) and just kinda happily ended O,o Dunno endings are important to me alot <_<
As said in the video info, technical issues that I was not able to fix due to the projectfile getting deleted pretty much a few days after the convention.
ExSphere wrote:As much as I wanted to enjoy this I really didn't. Sorry man.
It's alright =) Hope you'll enjoy my next, new release instead then.
ImageImageImage
Image

Kevmaster
Eisenbahnmörser
Joined: Sun May 28, 2006 12:20 pm
Org Profile

Re: Tearing Apart - Ichiban Japan Expo 08: Judges choice winner!

Post by Kevmaster » Sun Sep 13, 2009 11:53 pm

The Beginning sequence was executed right, but then it lost me pretty fast. This song is so deeply emotional and full of metaphors that describe the I's lost. The video just seemed shallow and the scene selection felt out of place, especially as the video has a beginning that would work for an actual storyline-video.
Last edited by Kevmaster on Mon Sep 14, 2009 10:06 am, edited 1 time in total.

User avatar
Tearx
The Malicious Feline
Joined: Tue Apr 05, 2005 4:39 pm
Location: OC
Org Profile

Re: Tearing Apart - Ichiban Japan Expo 08: Judges choice winner!

Post by Tearx » Mon Sep 14, 2009 1:17 am

maggeh =D
-----------------
Bleh. I did not like that. The beginning had a interesting concept, but then it went downhill.
nothing more to me than pretty scenes(with badquality/tech issues) slapped with a emotional song to make it look all serious-face drama.
Image

User avatar
VIDOK
Joined: Sat May 17, 2008 11:15 am
Contact:
Org Profile

Re: Tearing Apart - Ichiban Japan Expo 08: Judges choice winner!

Post by VIDOK » Mon Sep 14, 2009 3:50 am

Good job! 4/5
V for VIDOK [FS] Opium-V

User avatar
MimS
Baguette Master
Joined: Mon Mar 03, 2008 12:32 pm
Status: With all other Seleçãos
Location: Paris
Org Profile

Re: Tearing Apart - Ichiban Japan Expo 08: Judges choice winner!

Post by MimS » Mon Sep 14, 2009 4:03 am

I really think that all your serious, drama, sentimental videos are boring Zetzu.
When you do something as rythmic as More than enough, it's clearly more enjoyable...

Anyways, still waiting for your next videos because I know you're a great editor.
Image
Image

User avatar
TwilightChrono
Joined: Wed Nov 21, 2007 3:11 am
Location: In Your Dreams.......Watching You Sleep
Contact:
Org Profile

Re: Tearing Apart - Ichiban Japan Expo 08: Judges choice winner!

Post by TwilightChrono » Mon Sep 14, 2009 7:14 am

This was a nice change of pace for me. I don't watch too many sentimental vids and this is the second sentimental vid I've watched tonight that I was able to sit all the way through.

Compared to your usual stuff nowadays, this isn't anything special. But it shows how far you've come editing wise. Granted you didn't have a lot of time to make it and not to mention you made it one day, the mood for some reason seemed right to me. Although scene selection wasn't too great (I'm one to talk), I still enjoyed this. 4/5 :up:
Image
Premiering At Another Anime Con 2012

User avatar
Magnus
Treasure this time
Joined: Mon Mar 27, 2006 1:40 pm
Status: Extremely Handsome
Location: Sweden
Org Profile

Re: Tearing Apart - Ichiban Japan Expo 08: Judges choice winner!

Post by Magnus » Mon Sep 14, 2009 10:02 am

Kev: Thanks for the really constructive feedback, I understand what you mean. From the opinions of you and Ingow,
I just might get tempted on re-creating a video with this song once more. when I'm not as lazy that is.

Tear: tear =]

VIDOK: Thanks :up:

~MimS~: Hmm, might be. Still, I enjoy editing sentimental, romance/drama videos more I guess. ^^

TwilightChrono: Thanks, how nice that you liked it :up:
ImageImageImage
Image

User avatar
Niwa
Cake Addiction
Joined: Fri Jul 02, 2004 6:41 pm
Location: Sweden
Contact:
Org Profile

Re: Tearing Apart - Ichiban Japan Expo 08: Judges choice winner!

Post by Niwa » Mon Sep 14, 2009 10:24 am

Banana! |:>

I remember having a hard time judging between this and Vic's Too bad video back at Ichiban. I thought it was pretty neat considering the time you had, but I kinda agree that your scene selection was kinda shallow sometimes.

Like I said before... make something fresh :3 or I'l whip you
Image

User avatar
Megamom
Joined: Fri Mar 31, 2006 1:05 pm
Status: Old Forces
Location: Costa Rica
Contact:
Org Profile

Re: Tearing Apart - Ichiban Japan Expo 08: Judges choice winner!

Post by Megamom » Mon Sep 14, 2009 12:42 pm

Zetzu video!

I really like the sentiments, the video is very sentimental, scenes and music achieve a atmosphere very good, an atmosphere full of feelings in my opinion! :up:

5/5 :up:
NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE

Locked

Return to “AMV Announcements & Feedback”