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Post by WesW » Tue Jul 15, 2008 11:46 pm

Autraya wrote: ok comments on the vid; overall I think the sync could have been a lot tighter. For a character profile as driftroot said you probably needed more of a set up in the first half. Although it's a classic, this song really didn't do the story you were trying to tell justice and although what kept me interested were all the damn spoliers and parts of wolfs rain I hadn't seen it wasn't enough to stop the video from falling flat. "Old School" editing requires a good combo of scene selection, mood sync, internal sync among other things to keep the viewer entertained. What put me off were scenes jumping back and forth through the series in the first half with little cohesiveness and there were times when the music was fast but the motion in the scenes was slow and vice versa. Hard cuts not quite on beat and although it was good that you used different instruments even there sync needed more work. *sigh*
Well, you're a great editor, and I hope you'll keep helping me with my vids, but it seems that we interpreted the song very differently.
The cohesive part of the first half of the vid was the depiction of the world of Wolf's Rain: violent, dog-eat-dog, living by the law of the jungle, etc. The reason I stated that this part was like a trailer was that it didn't have a cohesive storyline like my vids usually do.
In your partial review of the beta you mentioned feeling that the guns firing in the opening sequence didn't fit because of the speed difference. That comment told me that we weren't seeing things the same way. I'm not saying that one of us is right and the other wrong; we're just not seeing eye-to-eye. Perhaps you're not the only one, judging from the initial scores for the vid.
I can only surmise that this also accounts for the feeling that the sync was off. For a lot of scenes, especially in the second half of the vid, I synched to internal motion such as sword swings, rather than the cuts, keying on the moments of swiftest motion. If you felt that the sync was off, it shows that you weren't "feeling" the music the way I was. I'm sure that I can improve in areas such as scene selection, but for something that's quantifiable like timing, I have that down. Again, I'm not saying that you're wrong and I'm right, I'm just saying that we interpreted the song differently.

If you would, I would really appreciate it if you'd point out some specific points where you feel that the sync is off. It might help me in the future when I'm deciding how to structure the vid.
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Post by Omikami_Amaterasu » Wed Jul 16, 2008 11:34 pm

Hey WesW :)

I got your message about your new videos, so I took a look at both (Everytime and Descent of Darcia); overall I like both of them much more than Wayward Son, but IMO they still share some similar issues so I'll go over them together.

Sync: The internal sync in both videos have improved significantly over Wayward Son, so good job. :) But like Wayward Son, I think the editing could be tighter - I don't mean using beat sync on every single beat; lots of AMVs overdo that and it's simply abuse. But most of the shots are still just a tad too long IMO, especially since you like to pick fairly upbeat music. Even though there are some great internal sync, the cutting of the shots need to be tighter to flow along with the pace of the music, which like I said, is simply a tad faster than your editing. Also, at the beginning of Descent of Darcia you used a lot of crossfades - I would use straight cuts simply because the beats in the music are so pronounced.

Lipflop: There's a good amount of lipflopping in both videos but primarily in "Everytime". I know a lot of new editors see this as a non-issue because "I like this shot and it can't be helped if the person happens to be talking in the shot". Well, in the professional editing world, lipflopping is one of those big no-no that you simply don't tread upon. If the shot you want has moving lips, you simply find another shot, even if the replacement is inferior. There's a good reason for this... watching a person's mouth move while hearing no words coming out is simply very distracting, especially in a music video.

Anyway, glad to see you are progressing as an AMV editor though - I am working on my second video myself. :) Look forward to seeing more work from you!
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Post by DriftRoot » Thu Jul 17, 2008 9:28 am

Autraya wrote: He got a "1" and you were the only person to comment and said "nice" things.
So that disclaimer was incase people thought I was saying "I'm being sarcastic, everyone read between the lines 'cause I'm talking about driftroot"
Which is not what I was getting at. I was generalising :wink:
Ohhh, ok, yeah I didn't leave that 1, I downloaded it after that happened. Besides, if I think something's deserving of a 1, I'm going to say so. ^_^
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Post by WesW » Sun Jul 20, 2008 2:51 am

Been a rough few days, so I haven't been online much.
Omikami_Amaterasu wrote:Hey WesW :)
I got your message about your new videos, so I took a look at both (Everytime and Descent of Darcia); overall I like both of them much more than Wayward Son, but IMO they still share some similar issues so I'll go over them together.

Sync: The internal sync in both videos have improved significantly over Wayward Son, so good job. :) But like Wayward Son, I think the editing could be tighter - I don't mean using beat sync on every single beat; lots of AMVs overdo that and it's simply abuse. But most of the shots are still just a tad too long IMO, especially since you like to pick fairly upbeat music. Even though there are some great internal sync, the cutting of the shots need to be tighter to flow along with the pace of the music, which like I said, is simply a tad faster than your editing. Also, at the beginning of Descent of Darcia you used a lot of crossfades - I would use straight cuts simply because the beats in the music are so pronounced.
I actually had straight cuts at the beginning at first, but they just didn't feel right with the music. The fades are only a fraction of a second- just enough to take the edge off the transition.

I guess the most common complaint I get is that my shots are too long or the editing is too slow. My most common complaint with your typical AMV is the opposite- the cuts are so fast that it all becomes a blur after a minute or so because your eyes get strained. I just spent the last couple of hours watching some AMVs that I like and then comparing them to my work, and the biggest difference is that I use my cuts to compose whole scenes, whereas most everyone else either throws in unrelated cuts to try and emulate the mood of the music, or else chops everything to pieces to stay with the beat of the music. When done well, each technique can produce a pleasant feeling while you're watching the vid, but as soon as it's over you can't really remember exactly what you just saw.
Lipflop: There's a good amount of lipflopping in both videos but primarily in "Everytime"....
Anyway, glad to see you are progressing as an AMV editor though - I am working on my second video myself. :) Look forward to seeing more work from you!
The only lip-flap in Descent is when Cher begins to say something and Darcia grabs her by the chin.
Every Time did have a lot, however, and I managed to eliminate or reduce all of it, except the one scene where I want the lip-flaps (when Aoi's admin. is lecturing the couple on why they can't stay together), so thanks for the heads-up here. There were a couple of instances where I had never noticed the flaps before, and a couple others where I didn't think anything could be done. It's amazing what you can get away with in certain scenes. I also went ahead and eliminated flapping from several scenes in Sunshine, which is the new vid I've composed over the last couple of weeks.
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Post by Omikami_Amaterasu » Sun Jul 20, 2008 6:29 am

WesW wrote:I actually had straight cuts at the beginning at first, but they just didn't feel right with the music. The fades are only a fraction of a second- just enough to take the edge off the transition.
Trust me straight cuts will work - if they look awkward it means you don't have the cuts "on the beat". In fact a lot of your cuts are off the beat, or are on a minor beat that isn't strong or pronounced enough to register as the primary rhythm; that may be the reason why I feel your syncing is awkward, even though I know you paid attention to sync during edit.
I guess the most common complaint I get is that my shots are too long or the editing is too slow. My most common complaint with your typical AMV is the opposite- the cuts are so fast that it all becomes a blur after a minute or so because your eyes get strained. I just spent the last couple of hours watching some AMVs that I like and then comparing them to my work, and the biggest difference is that I use my cuts to compose whole scenes, whereas most everyone else either throws in unrelated cuts to try and emulate the mood of the music, or else chops everything to pieces to stay with the beat of the music.
If you get a lot of complaints then may be there IS an issue. While it is good to be confident about your editing choices, it is even more important to listen to what your viewers have to say - you don't have to agree with them all the time, but at least don't be so quick to argue against critiques.

I do agree that a lot of music videos (not just AMVs) are fragmented and use unrelated shots to sync mood or beats, BUT that doesn't mean you can't cut a music video with good mood/beat sync AND use corresponding shots/themes that flow together. I personally believe a balance between good content and good pacing can be reached. I am not a veteran editor or anything BUT that is my philosophy behind editing, so perhaps when you get the time you should look at the two AMVs I have on the Org: Trinity Rising is fast-paced and Masika is its opposite, very slow-paced. I maintain constant mood and beat sync without sacraficing the narrative - my shots are all shorter than yours but IMO are no less cohesive than your AMV's shot selections.
I'd compare your typical AMV to cotton candy- it may taste good while you're eating it, but it's empty calories. If that's all you want from a vid, then fine, sometimes it's all I want, too.
I'd like to think of my vids as full meals. They may not taste as sweet, but hopefully you'll have had time, because of the longer cuts and slower editing, to really take in what you are seeing and actually feel something.
I am afraid I have to disagree here. First off, you are completely missing the point. When we say your shots are too long, we mean that within the context of your musical choice. If you choose a slow music like my Masika video then nobody will tell you your shots are too long or your editing is too slow. But your music is fast and upbeat, so there simply can't be any slacks.

Secondly, don't underestimate the human eyes' ability to catch quick flashes of imagery. Have you looked at well-cut fast-paced AMVs like GitSP? Even when images flash by at only a few frames each, I not only can see each shot clearly but I don't find the viewing experience straining or forgetable at all. If that's too fast for you, try Magic Pad.
One thing I have noticed is that the posts in my threads aren't like those in your average thread, at least the ones I've looked at. In my threads people tend to speak in whole sentences and even paragraphs *gasp*, unlike the string of "me gets" that you usually see. They may or may not have liked the vid, but people don't take the time to compose these types of posts unless the vid has affected them at least a little, and I have to think that much of this is because of my slower editing style.
Actually it's because you make long replies to people's comments. Most editors don't bother to do that, so it becomes a very typical "Nice video!", "Thank you!" thread.
The only lip-flap in Descent is when Cher begins to say something and Darcia grabs her by the chin.
Every Time did have a lot, however, and I managed to eliminate or reduce all of it, except the one scene where I want the lip-flaps (when Aoi's admin. is lecturing the couple on why they can't stay together), so thanks for the heads-up here. There were a couple of instances where I had never noticed the flaps before, and a couple others where I didn't think anything could be done. It's amazing what you can get away with in certain scenes. I also went ahead and eliminated flapping from several scenes in Sunshine, which is the new vid I've composed over the last couple of weeks.
As a general rule, I would not leave a SINGLE lipflap in, period.

If the lips HAVE to move because that is a shot you MUST use, then try lip sync that shot. You can actually either mask or crop portions of a video out and overlay it on the original to manipulate a character's mouth and other facial features without affecting the other things going on in the shot. I have run into such a shot in my new Black Lagoon AMV and I did exactly that, works like a charm.
As for the sync being lax in Darcia, I have written an explanation that I hope clears everything up:
"I employed a good bit of what I call "energy-to-energy" sync in this vid, especially in the second half. In this technique, points of musical emphasis are matched with points of maximum visual movement, such as lunges, sword swings, etc. These points often occur right before or after cuts, and may be misinterpreted as bad sync.
What you wrote here is called internal sync, and it's nothing out of the ordinary I am afraid.

Regardless of how well-executed your internal syncs are, do pay attention to where your shots begin and end - the cuts will be more effective if they are also located on "musical emphasis".

And I don't see how this justifies leaving flapping lips in. Try masking or cropping to get rid of lip movements.
I assure you that the sync in the vid is spot-on, so if it seems off, try re-watching the vid with energy and emphasis in mind."
If you are so confident in your editing ability then I guess there's no need to look for feedbacks from others in the future? Not trying to be hostile but I really don't think this kind of attitude will help you grow as an editor. If your viewers disagree with your editing choices, you as the editor should be the one who revisits the issues to see if there is indeed a problem. not reject their feedbacks right away; I know viewers don't always know the editor's intentions right away but frankly it's rather insulting to your viewers if you treat them like they didn't pay attention when they watched your videos.

Listen more, especially if you actually requested for criticism and feedback. And don't be too quick to reject other people's editing styles, even if they are not your cup of tea, there's always something good about them you can learn from.
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Post by DriftRoot » Sun Jul 20, 2008 9:50 am

WesW wrote: One thing I have noticed is that the posts in my threads aren't like those in your average thread, at least the ones I've looked at. In my threads people tend to speak in whole sentences and even paragraphs *gasp*, unlike the string of "me gets" that you usually see. They may or may not have liked the vid, but people don't take the time to compose these types of posts unless the vid has affected them at least a little, and I have to think that much of this is because of my slower editing style.
Er...I also think you're barking up the wrong tree. Announcement threads have the habit of becoming a vehicle by which the audience members can announce their presence. The bigger/better/more unique the AMV/editor (no offense to anyone, I'm just trying to get a generic point across), the more it tends to happen. If I don't have anything to contribute to an announcement thread other than a "Drift was here" statement or brief comment that's of no concern to anyone else whatsoever, then I don't post anything because I can say it in a QC.

In this case, though, you were interested in feedback, put some time into your initial post and hadn't gotten any replies, so I checked out your AMV and shared my 2 cents. This isn't unusual for me, though (in fact I tend to give more feedback than is strictly necessary) and my input had nothing whatsoever to do with your editing style or this AMV.
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Post by WesW » Sun Jul 20, 2008 11:00 pm

DriftRoot wrote: Er...I also think you're barking up the wrong tree. ... my input had nothing whatsoever to do with your editing style or this AMV.
If it was coincidence in your case, then ok, but it's just something I've gradually noticed over the course of the dozen-plus threads I've started. I may be completely wrong, though.

Omikami, when you get to be my age, I think you'll look at some of those topics differently. People change their views over time, and just because a majority of young people say something doesn't necessarily mean that middle-aged people have to agree. ;)
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Post by Omikami_Amaterasu » Sun Jul 20, 2008 11:50 pm

WesW wrote:If it was coincidence in your case, then ok, but it's just something I've gradually noticed over the course of the dozen-plus threads I've started. I may be completely wrong, though.
Umm for one most threads don't get a lot of replies. Those that do typically use animes or music that are extremely popular - you use neither, so the kind of people who goes "Cool, /gets" don't come here. Only people who actually take time to browse the board AND are thoughtful enough to oblige to your request for feedback posts in your threads, and if you want my honest opinion you seem to get more criticism than average - what furthers the wordy replies, like I said, is the fact that you always counter-argue against those criticisms.
Omikami, when you get to be my age, I think you'll look at some of those topics differently. People change their views over time, and just because a majority of young people say something doesn't necessarily mean that middle-aged people have to agree. ;)
Sorry but please don't pull the age card on me or anyone. Tastes and preferences vary no matter the age group and just because you are older doesn't mean you are right. In fact I find it very presumptous to say "most young people" said something - like if you did background checks on everyone who commented in your threads.

Editing style and techniques may evolve over time but age has nothing to do with why "young" people may or may not like your videos. If I watch an old film made from before I was born, will I neccesarily think the editing is bad? Of course not. There are certain elements in editing that are universal regardless of style and genre, and it is those elements that define good and bad editing - these elements go beyond the boundary of age and personal taste. Even though I very much dislike the kind of music you choose for your AMVs or your shot arrangements, I still hold back those personal preferences when I watch your videos and only give you critiques on the very technical aspects of editing. Just from my online experience I can tell you most people won't be so objective when they comment.

In any case this will be the last comment I leave in this, or any other threads you make. Nothing against you personally but I really don't know how to deal with your "Please give me feedbacks, even though I am going to argue against every point you make" mentality. I come to this site to learn and grow as an editor, not to butt head against other people.
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Post by WesW » Mon Jul 21, 2008 11:55 am

Good riddance. Jeez.
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