Fate's Scrawl...suspense for Halloween :o

CodeZTM · Post by **CodeZTM** » Tue Oct 31, 2006 10:48 pm

Awesome! Really neat video. Good editing and good video quality. 4.5/5

Mamo! · Post by **Mamo!** » Tue Oct 31, 2006 11:37 pm

Ooo Nicely done. I especially loved the fast, suspenseful changing scenes near the end. The chilling feeling it had was cool as well. Me likes.

Moonlight Soldier · Post by **Moonlight Soldier** » Wed Nov 01, 2006 11:15 pm

Kariudo wrote:I'm not a horror master, but I think maybe decreasing the brightness using avisynth (at least in scenes that took place in the day) could've added to the mood.

The car accident had a lot of "jump" potential, I think it should have been used at a place where the music gets really loud for a short time (though it doesn't seem like this song had toomuch of that).

overall, you did a pretty good job (especially with such limited source footage)

oO There was only maybe three scenes from the day, and I tried making the roto'd Ryuuk all shadowy-like >_> I see what you mean though. If I would have used more of the song, I might have been able to use the truck/motorcycle scene differently, but I only had two episodes at that point, I only switched in one clip from the third ep. Hehe thanks for the feedback

otakuforlife wrote:cute, I should let you see my beta for the SOAD project using death note..
Anyway glad to see more DN videos, there still on episode 5 in raw here.

Cute? Oo.

jubbers wrote:Yeah, the first loud note made me jump.

Nyahaaa~! Excellent XD

Thanks for the thoughts so far peoples

Shinodude · Post by **Shinodude** » Wed Nov 01, 2006 11:24 pm

omfg moom I love you!!!! I didnt know the anime was out yet! I love you for this!! also kick ass amv

YouTube · Post by **Ileia** » Thu Nov 02, 2006 1:03 am

\o/

So many good horror videos this year!

Knowname · Post by **Knowname** » Thu Nov 02, 2006 1:16 pm

hmm... short... event based... hmm... could this have anything to do with my 6606 video I had you watch?? LOL TREND-SETTER!! ;p

HAHA! well other than the rather dejavu feeling I had, this video was a nice jjot! a fun little bit with a good holloween feel to it!

BauziOLD · Post by **BauziOLD** » Thu Nov 02, 2006 2:03 pm

I don´t think that is awesome, but ok. A nice "trailer" for Death Note
The end of the amv is not my taste. There was no scare-peak or excitment-peak. It is good no question, but I also think, that you can bring up with

To the fonts: Nice for your production logo, but I didn´t like, that the rest of the text runs so "fast" on the screen. I would be more pleased about a static position with a type of fade out (blur or whatever...).

A black light blur-border (i hope you know what I mean) would be a great plus for atmosphere. Also a little play with spotlights and so, that there would be more of the screen black.

To 0:55 the peak was in my eyes wrong set. It should be on the position when the truck hits the motorcycle.

The video is cool when he starts to write into the book. It works very well with the flow.

Videoquality is cool with the black borders. I think they take part in the atmosphare, but the little borders on the left and the right are on the wrong place. Next time "croop"´em out please!

lilgumba · Post by **lilgumba** » Fri Nov 03, 2006 12:09 am

dang girl, that video gave me the creeps a little bit. (especially since i was just talking to someone about this anime like 2 hours ago. we never seen it.) the frantic nature of it was good especially towards the end. it would have been better if i saw it on halloween, in the dark, at midnight.

Bakadeshi · Post by **Bakadeshi** » Fri Nov 03, 2006 12:09 am

ha if I had clicked on this thread and noticed it was death note, I wouldve gotten it long ago

(thank Angelx for linking from the deathnote thread)

/me gets

Knowname · Post by **Knowname** » Fri Nov 03, 2006 11:13 am

But it's Moonie ;p you should get anything by Moonie... or Moonie -_-. That's my law.