Can I interest you in a vinland saga Amv in this trying time?

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Can I interest you in a vinland saga Amv in this trying time?

Post by HeartbreakOrchestraAmvs » Tue Jul 16, 2019 6:18 pm

It's not really too polished, but it's something.

Oh, and don't mind all those shite still masks, It's just that i needed something to do while juicing my brains out for whatever i'd be using as my next clip, which let me tell you, making a highly edited amv using only 70 minutes of content is something Dante forgot to put right below limbo in the layers of hell.

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Re: Can I interest you in a vinland saga Amv in this trying time?

Post by Kireblue » Tue Jul 16, 2019 6:44 pm

Welcome to the Org! The rules of announcing videos in the "AMV Announcement forum" require you to catalog your video first. So please do that as soon as possible :D . If you don't know how, here is the FAQ post about it http://www.animemusicvideos.org/forum/v ... 2#p1546652

Until then, I'm going to move your thread to the “Awaiting Catalog Entry” forum. And I can move it back once I see that you've done it.

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Re: Can I interest you in a vinland saga Amv in this trying time?

Post by Mol » Sat Jul 20, 2019 11:51 am

Editing seems on spot. i guess some of the masks .. would be better without some. :uhoh: Anyway i guess you shoud try mixing 2 series that are similiar or something longer, good luck. Avoid ops with credits too.
Still better than that MMO.
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Re: Can I interest you in a vinland saga Amv in this trying time?

Post by HeartbreakOrchestraAmvs » Tue Jul 23, 2019 5:34 pm

Mol wrote:
Sat Jul 20, 2019 11:51 am
Editing seems on spot. i guess some of the masks .. would be better without some. :uhoh: Anyway i guess you shoud try mixing 2 series that are similiar or something longer, good luck. Avoid ops with credits too.
It's the bane of editing using 60 minutes of content really, but yeah the masks were a result of me being bored while looking for the next clip to edit so i'd just mask something while i thought of whatever would fit what comes next.

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Re: Can I interest you in a vinland saga Amv in this trying time?

Post by Kionon » Wed Jul 24, 2019 12:08 am

HeartbreakOrchestraAmvs wrote:
Tue Jul 16, 2019 6:18 pm
It's not really too polished, but it's something. Oh, and don't mind all those shite still masks, It's just that i needed something to do while juicing my brains out for whatever i'd be using as my next clip, which let me tell you, making a highly edited amv using only 70 minutes of content is something Dante forgot to put right below limbo in the layers of hell.
Echo everything Mol said.

The shaky cam made me ill, and combined with the credits, I couldn't finish it. Action alone is not enough to hold a viewer's attention. You need a concept, a theme, some kind of narrative structure. This is better shown rather than described. I think NHMK's Birthright is the best example of this:

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Re: Can I interest you in a vinland saga Amv in this trying time?

Post by HeartbreakOrchestraAmvs » Wed Jul 24, 2019 12:36 pm

Kionon wrote:
Wed Jul 24, 2019 12:08 am
HeartbreakOrchestraAmvs wrote:
Tue Jul 16, 2019 6:18 pm
It's not really too polished, but it's something. Oh, and don't mind all those shite still masks, It's just that i needed something to do while juicing my brains out for whatever i'd be using as my next clip, which let me tell you, making a highly edited amv using only 70 minutes of content is something Dante forgot to put right below limbo in the layers of hell.
Echo everything Mol said.

The shaky cam made me ill, and combined with the credits, I couldn't finish it. Action alone is not enough to hold a viewer's attention. You need a concept, a theme, some kind of narrative structure. This is better shown rather than described. I think NHMK's Birthright is the best example of this:

I recognize the validity of all your points, especially the one about action alone not being enough even before your comment. I think i used better structure for my next Project, albeit it was still limited.

And about your point with the credits, yeah.... roughly 60% or over of this amv was Credits and previews, as i started without realizing the huge delay between the third and fourth episodes.
Although If I may somewhat disagree on one point, while I did overdo the shaky cam sometimes i think all in all action and zooms are always enhanced with some shake


On a note sorry for both thumbnail, but that's what usually gets the most attention to videos

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Re: Can I interest you in a vinland saga Amv in this trying time?

Post by seasons » Sun Jul 28, 2019 4:47 pm

I would try to hold back on the amazingly intense violent action within the opening seconds of a video. It's the quietest part of the song, but immediately from that point it's hard to feel like we're building up towards anything. Because how could we?

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