Last Chance [Online Contest 2015]

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Last Chance [Online Contest 2015]

Post by Shinzui IT » Sun Nov 29, 2015 11:56 pm

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About the video: Kou and Futaba being friends since childhood they began to have feelings towards each other. Futaba seeing Yuuri so close to Kou made her to become extremely jealous of her and when something happens to her she began to be in an emotional state and regrets the things she thought of Yuuri and wanted to remember the happy things they did with each other. As Futaba starts pushing Kou away because of her feelings of regret he then becomes a bit depressed and tries to still be by her side. Soon Futaba realizes that she has to make a choice and it is her last chance to do so.

Personal Comment: I started this in July and had to keep pushing back when I will finish it. Since the anime is so short with only 12 episodes it made it a bit hard for me to think of how I will get my ideas through. In the end I have accomplished what I wanted to do, but I had no other choice but to leave some things out and had to make a decision on how I wanted some parts to play out. I have to thank xGeminii, ZEVS1993, and BeautyxPain102 for helping me throughout the video and especially UnlastingDreams for giving me this song so I can edit to it. In the end I enjoyed the turnout of this and I hope everyone does as well.
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Re: Last Chance [Online Contest 2015]

Post by post-it » Mon Nov 30, 2015 2:14 pm

it's missing something .... can't put my finger on it!

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Re: Last Chance [Online Contest 2015]

Post by Shinzui IT » Mon Nov 30, 2015 4:04 pm

Thank you!
post-it wrote:it's missing something .... can't put my finger on it!
Well, I did mention I had to leave some things out because the anime is so short xD :pizza:
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Re: Last Chance [Online Contest 2015]

Post by CrackTheSky » Sat Dec 05, 2015 11:37 am

Not bad. It tells a pretty clear story, but the editing needs work...I really don't think those camera zooms or white flashes added anything, and they didn't flow too well IMO. It's kind of a messy video but the heart is there.

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Re: Last Chance [Online Contest 2015]

Post by Kireblue » Sat Dec 05, 2015 12:40 pm

CrackTheSky wrote:Not bad. It tells a pretty clear story, but the editing needs work...I really don't think those camera zooms or white flashes added anything, and they didn't flow too well IMO. It's kind of a messy video but the heart is there.
pretty much agree. The zooms feel out of place because you kept adding them at fairly slow part of the song, and the things leading up the zooms were fairly slow paced as well. It just kept breaking the mood and flow for me. But I think that you did a really good job on the story :up:

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Re: Last Chance [Online Contest 2015]

Post by Shinzui IT » Sun Dec 06, 2015 11:56 pm

Thanks guys! Yeah since I haven't done something like this in so long during my editing I started to realize that some things needed more work.
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