The source and anime combo is a good idea (considering lyrics will be beneficial); however, you do not follow lyrics for a majority of the video (i.e.; "feel alive and shatter me" could represent the girls' contract with The Incubators) so purpose of the chorus is nil for the entire video, thus throwing off my enjoyment. Also, 2:58 - 3:25 should really be faster, incorporate more scene selection around this area specifically because your clips are no longer matching the tempo of the music.
I hope this critique helps a little.
