Made this just for fun beacuse wanted to try making something from with the song and this movie. This is one of my first tries at an AMV so dont expect the world!
I would be really happy for any advice or critic if you have any
Jin roh and angels egg, it kinda works
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ZankAni
- Joined: Sun Aug 24, 2014 1:41 pm
Jin roh and angels egg, it kinda works
Made this just for fun beacuse wanted to try making something from with the song and this movie. This is one of my first tries at an AMV so dont expect the world!
I would be really happy for any advice or critic if you have any
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Changelling
- with double L
- Joined: Fri Apr 26, 2013 8:01 am
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Re: Jin roh and angels egg, it kinda works
You seem to have a solid understanding of Sync and flow which is quite honorable, and if this is one of your 1st videos then I really expect great things from you in the future! This video was quite smooth and the mood was perfect with your song. My only complaint is that it does not really go anywhere aside from total destruction. I was hoping it would last longer and maybe reach some progression with the story.
Just that. I wish you best of luck in future works
Just that. I wish you best of luck in future works
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CrackTheSky
- has trust issues
- Joined: Sun Aug 27, 2006 11:01 pm
- Status: Maybe editing?
- Location: Chicago
Re: Jin roh and angels egg, it kinda works
Kinda agree with Gabber, for a first video it's not bad (not as bad as my first videos, for example), but it really feels more like a blueprint for a bigger video. There's no focus or progression to the scene selection, it seems to be violence for the sake of violence. Coulda been made into an exposition on war, or some sort of story with chronological progression, but as it stands it's just a lot of violence with no explanation.
The editing is fine though, nice and simple and straightforward, which I tend to prefer. Bring your ideas into focus and you've got a bright future, methinks
The editing is fine though, nice and simple and straightforward, which I tend to prefer. Bring your ideas into focus and you've got a bright future, methinks
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ZankAni
- Joined: Sun Aug 24, 2014 1:41 pm
Re: Jin roh and angels egg, it kinda works
Thank you for the advice! yeah i see what you mean, did not rly have a story, but i wanna make one that has it! Mabye an amvs, but i dont know if im at that lvl yet : p995Gabber wrote:You seem to have a solid understanding of Sync and flow which is quite honorable, and if this is one of your 1st videos then I really expect great things from you in the future! This video was quite smooth and the mood was perfect with your song. My only complaint is that it does not really go anywhere aside from total destruction. I was hoping it would last longer and maybe reach some progression with the story.
Just that. I wish you best of luck in future works
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Replay Studios
- A Studio Within A Studio
- Joined: Sat Oct 04, 2008 8:10 pm
- Status: Replaying myself
Re: Jin roh and angels egg, it kinda works
agreed, not bad for a first video and welcome to the world of editing ^^