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My third AMV so far. Any comments are greatly appreciated, I'd be happy if you share ideas for improvement.
Timeless Vision (The Animatrix)
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peppy_heppy
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Timeless Vision (The Animatrix)
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My third AMV so far. Any comments are greatly appreciated, I'd be happy if you share ideas for improvement.
Last edited by peppy_heppy on Sun Feb 19, 2012 7:32 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Ijexis
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Re: Animatrix AMV - Timeless Vision
Damn...all that build up for nothing. It was basically just all one clip but I was fine with it because it set a really great mood up until 00:54, if you had capitalized on that crescendo, it would have been something epic. The zooms just lacked any sort of impact. A scene shift at 00:54 to something more story-driven would have carried a lot more weight.
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peppy_heppy
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Re: Animatrix AMV - Timeless Vision
Thank you for the feedback, =) although I can't really come up with something that could be inserted there simply because this is where the story ends and I wouldn't wanna go back in the past.Ijexis wrote:A scene shift at 00:54 to something more story-driven would have carried a lot more weight.
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Ijexis
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Re: Animatrix AMV - Timeless Vision
That makes perfect sense. I can see that you have a sense for mood-pieces and am interested to see what you come up with next. Don't be afraid to venture out with the idea realm of things and see what you can accomplish.peppy_heppy wrote:Thank you for the feedback, =) although I can't really come up with something that could be inserted there simply because this is where the story ends and I wouldn't wanna go back in the past.Ijexis wrote:A scene shift at 00:54 to something more story-driven would have carried a lot more weight.