Unreturner + Live Action DBZ Movie Trailer

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James Blond
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Unreturner + Live Action DBZ Movie Trailer

Post by James Blond » Tue Apr 27, 2010 7:30 pm

Hello!

First of all, this is the video I submitted for Anime Detour 2010's AMV Contest:

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And this is the video that won Detour's WTF Contest - "DBZ: The Rise Of HERCULE", if any of you happen to be interested...
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AXSU9qE9bTk

I'd appreciate any constructive criticism you all might have to offer!

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Re: Unreturner + Live Action DBZ Movie Trailer

Post by Kireblue » Fri May 07, 2010 12:06 am

I feel that some of the slower moments in this AMV would have really benefited from a few cross fades. In my opinion, cross fades are great for maintaining flow, portraying a story, and showing emotion. You mostly used hard cuts in this AMV, and I feel that it greatly took away from the plot and emotion that you were probably going for.

I also feel that this AMV didn't really have a climax. I feels like it should have happened around the 2 minute mark, but the scene that you used at this point isn't quite exciting enough to match the climax of the song.

Overall, I think that this AMV was ok, but I feel that its story and action scenes have a lot of untapped potential.

Edit: The live action DBZ trailer was actually pretty funny. I laughed so hard when Vegeta read Hercule's power level.
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"ITS OVER NINE!" :rofl:
I might just randomly start saying this now. And while everyone is waiting for me to say the "thousand" part, I'm just gonna walk away like I don't even know what they're talking about :lol: .

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Re: Unreturner + Live Action DBZ Movie Trailer

Post by Pie Row Maniac » Fri May 07, 2010 2:01 pm

"502 YouTube server error"?

Noooooo :(
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Re: Unreturner + Live Action DBZ Movie Trailer

Post by NS » Fri May 07, 2010 2:06 pm

ooo, wet sand.

/gets

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