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Autraya
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Post by Autraya » Thu Mar 27, 2008 5:08 pm

humm new song and anime for me soo /dloads will edit later with comments
new banzors in the making :p

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Post by Niwa » Thu Mar 27, 2008 7:25 pm

ROW ROW :o

/gets

EDIT: good good :up:
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Post by Warheart » Thu Mar 27, 2008 7:46 pm

Ok, one of the better amvs I've seen in a while. An using some of my favorite sources makes it very enjoyable as well. So I guess you might want some critique as well. I'd suggest not to rely on simple hardcuts to much in the next vid and add some minor effects to complete the flow like some brightness and contrast adjustments and blurs or something ppl don't really notive just to make some smoother transitions. As well, some more fades timed onto the solo of the guitars and such things. It's pretty decent editing but sometimes it lacks speed and sometimes a bit more clamness, if you know what I mean. But still 4/5. :)

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Post by Ijexis » Thu Mar 27, 2008 9:07 pm

That was just...wow.
Absolutely amazing. Doesn't beat you over the head with effects and just lets the anime speak for itself. Your scene selection and timing was lovely and I loved the use of internal sync. Although I thought the ending would have been perfect at 4:15 but I can't complain about the rest. The slow pacing in the beginning felt like an exposition into the climax of the AMV. Must say, wonderful work. :up: 4.5/5
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Post by ShatteredFlame » Thu Mar 27, 2008 9:43 pm

Good stuff :up: 4/5

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Post by Oli.C » Fri Mar 28, 2008 1:11 am

Thank you to everyone who took the time to watch the video and especially those who left some feedback! I have really taken your comments on board and will most certainly think long and hard about them when I come around to my next project. Cheers!
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Post by Flint the Dwarf » Fri Mar 28, 2008 6:09 am

Awesome. I'd been wanting someone to do that song justice, and you did so while also reminding me why I love that album so much. Very well done; this is just my type of video. Smooth, solid, powerful. I hope you make more stuff like this.

I also second Warheart's critique. A little more subtlety could be added to create a better mix of visuals.
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Post by meleechampion » Fri Mar 28, 2008 3:44 pm

Not my type, I couldn't sit through it. =(

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