I like the fact that you had a clear storyline in mind, and that you stuck with it even if it means re-creating the whole scene to obtain what you need.
Aside from the size of Ayase's head in some plans, that was awesomely done

pan_dbgt01 wrote:Was this mostly masking?


l33tmeatwad wrote:Raw masking with no attempt to really make the two sources look like they belong together
l33tmeatwad wrote:perhaps you could work on color correction
l33tmeatwad wrote:the character art differences were very jarring

l33tmeatwad wrote:parts like at 1:30 where the girl has her head titled as you aligned the other character with her at a very bad angle
RenaSun wrote:l33tmeatwad wrote:Raw masking with no attempt to really make the two sources look like they belong togetherl33tmeatwad wrote:perhaps you could work on color correction
what is color correction for you? thick layer of looks, mojo and so on? I didn’t want to use them, I wanted to save the maximum of original colors, so using of curves, levels, masks, solids, OF helped me here a lot.
RenaSun wrote:l33tmeatwad wrote:the character art differences were very jarring
first of all I wanted to use character, who is really older then girl and he should do paperworks, so Hattori from Bakuman was perfect for my idea. secondly, how do you think about this
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this is original Chihayafuru character. is he suitable?
RenaSun wrote:l33tmeatwad wrote:parts like at 1:30 where the girl has her head titled as you aligned the other character with her at a very bad angle
I don’t think so.
l33tmeatwad wrote:Also, watch your angles, parts like at 1:30 where the girl has her head titled as you aligned the other character with her at a very bad angle stand out as very poor design and you should either mask out the background or use a better angle for both characters.

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