[Pokama] ~ Angel with a Shotgun ~ AMV

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[Pokama] ~ Angel with a Shotgun ~ AMV

Postby Pokama » Fri May 24, 2013 7:19 pm

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Hello guys,
It´s the first time for me to being here and I hope for polite conversation. :oops: <<dat smile xD
I´m still learning editing, so have a little understanding.
Why I used this version of the Music ? The original one, was a bit
too slow for me, to work with, and be honest this version is better , right?
Also, the text fits perfectly with the anime. This is also the last AMV for Sword Art Online that I done.
Hope you like it , feedback would be nice too.

Video: Angel with a Shotgun
Category: Action , Sentimental
Anime: Sword Art Online
Song: Angel with a Shotgun (Nightcore)
Artist: The Cab
Creator: Pokama

My Youtube channel: http://www.youtube.com/user/Pokama4u
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Re: [Pokama] ~ Angel with a Shotgun ~ AMV

Postby imp » Sat May 25, 2013 3:39 am

just a small thing:
you see your video's page link?
(http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=192054)
take the numbers at the end, and put them in between the
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Pokama wrote:Why I used this version of the Music ? [...], and be honest this version is better , right?

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Well, let's get to your AMV, I'll try to be polite from now on because you hoped for that.
Most of your mask transitions are really smooth, the one at 0:47 where kirito comes flying in from the upper left corner looked pretty crappy thought.
Your AMV pretty much tells the story of the anime, which is ok, but I disliked the fact that at "special" scenes there was no time to look at them at all, of course, the music kind of demanded fast editing yet it wasn't enjoyable to watch.
Another thing, the overlay / blending or whatever it's called you used near the end didn't fit the rest of the AMV.
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