I wish you had uploaded it to this site. I can't really comment on visual quality, since it's only a stremaing copy, however, I do notice a few things visually. For one, you have a watermark in the top right corner of your AMV. Very distracting for viewers and is just a generally sloppy thing to leave in.
In terms of mood, I felt like you captured the overall mood of the song pretty well. The anime and music fit well together, and it's a believable combination.
That being said, it could have been synced much better. There were some really solid moments, but then there were also parts of the AMV where it felt very disjointed and not matching with the music at all. Like the backgorund music wasn't even a considering factor. This usually came about during the parts of the AMV that included the scenery from the schoolgirls perspective. This is a video that could really be interesting with internal sync, but it only hit it some of the time.
However, originality really suffered. This is a pretty over-used anime, and didn't bring much to the table.
All in all, it was enjoyable enough.