[could be on AKROSS] unbearable sin against fragility

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Cingiz
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[could be on AKROSS] unbearable sin against fragility

Postby Cingiz » Mon Feb 04, 2013 10:20 am


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I present to you a brand new AMV I made in my modest burrow. :awesome: I tried to put together a random instrumental song with a random anime...I hope u'll like it :shark:
just DON'T BE AFRAID of Mirai Mikki :) I tried to change the plot...When I chose the anime i had no idea what it'll be about..I must say, I didn't like Mirai Nikki at all... :beer:

I'll highly appreciate if you leave a comment down here :wink:

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bombush
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Re: [could be on AKROSS] unbearable sin against fragility

Postby bombush » Wed Feb 06, 2013 1:44 pm

Released!

I'm really glad you got rid of those nasty explosions ^^. On the other hand the storytelling would still use some work. The transition to the rape scene still feels really abrupt with no build-up whatsoever. Then the story gets kind of messy and hard to follow - mainly because it's too apparent there are shots from different scenes mixed together. When all leads you have to follow the story are little glimpses of characters and sorroundings one tends to notice little differences. And things like well-lit interior changing to dark exterior, characters appearing/disappearing, the hero's jacket changing color, characters switching sides and so on make linking the shots difficult.
So the storytelling would still use some work and some clever filtering/rotoscoping but I guess you were already fed up with this enough.

As for the technical aspect - well done as usual^^.
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Re: [could be on AKROSS] unbearable sin against fragility

Postby Cingiz » Thu Feb 07, 2013 2:55 am

Thanks for the summary, my friend :) I agree in all things and...

bombush wrote:...I guess you were already fed up with this enough...


...you definitely hit the point here :) I know...It's a shame, but I don't think the general idea worth much work during exams..as you said...I'm just glad it's finally out ^^'
and I can work on something more interesting.


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