I suppose I should give actual feedback...as the video is a double parody by parodying a parody, you did well at matching tech wise with what you were trying to mimic, but source wise...it was an interesting pick. The raw sources together COULD work, but the way you approached it did not. Shin's parody of the original used basic animation and mimicked the original quite well with an actual cat, where yours breaks down is the use of high detail sexy animation and using the crude animation. By doing this you lost the charm the original and shin's had from the "cute" factor which both portrayed. Had you used original scenes and kept them in tact with the "dance" parts I feel like it would have presented better, as the raw "sexy" nature of the animation with the audio source could have been fun. As-is, the presentation feels dirty and awkward, not really my idea of a good parody as for me a good parody really captures the essence of the original. I really feel like this would have come out better had you not tried to parody something tech wise and went in a different direction with it.