Kenzichu's amvs ~ Girls Bravo+Basshunter,and Candle+Clannad

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Kenzichu's amvs ~ Girls Bravo+Basshunter,and Candle+Clannad

Post by Kenzichu » Sun Aug 30, 2009 7:27 pm



I really hope everyone enjoys it, but when i was making it i has someone very close to me in mind ^_^
i know there are black flashes, but i don't know why they're there. Please just ignore them!!
I worked very hard on this. Let's leave it at that ^_^!
Enjoy!

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I was beta tested by Orwell and Tear from #amv. And for Orwell to give it his seal of approval is just great! I hope this video gets a lot of attention. I learned a lot more non-effect related things while making this amv and i applied them. This stars out slow like Tomoyo's and Nagisa's relationship then blossoms! I'm very proud of this and actually worked off and on it for 2 weeks. I was testing footage and music and finally found my muse and began serious editing ^_~. Please take a look at it and tell me what you think! This is..totally not like anything i've ever done. But i recommend reading the video description. It explains more ^_^ If you read this whole thing, arigatto! :sweat:



Thank you again! I hope this video makes you feel something. idk what it might be, but sill..i hope ^_^
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Re: Kenzichu's DREAM~ Girls Bravo+Basshunter

Post by Tearx » Sun Aug 30, 2009 7:58 pm

oheh. ;3
I mostly already told you how I felt about this.

too much fanservice.. /me shields eyes

DOTA...basshunter needs to die already. oheh did I say that? ;P
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Re: Kenzichu's DREAM~ Girls Bravo+Basshunter

Post by ExSphere » Sun Aug 30, 2009 11:07 pm

Didn't enjoy this at all =s
Couldn't find a theme, nothing interesting in the video, and honestly it's flat out too long and boring.
Maybe next time try making sure the song compliments the anime, by more than just 1 or 2 lyric's in the song.

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Kenzichu (Orwell approved) Clannad|Candle|White Tie Event

Post by Kenzichu » Wed Sep 02, 2009 3:02 am

I was beta tested by Orwell and Tear from #amv. And for Orwell to give it his seal of approval is just great! I hope this video gets a lot of attention. I learned a lot more non-effect related things while making this amv and i applied them. This stars out slow like Tomoyo's and Nagisa's relationship then blossoms! I'm very proud of this and actually worked off and on it for 2 weeks. I was testing footage and music and finally found my muse and began serious editing ^_~. Please take a look at it and tell me what you think! This is..totally not like anything i've ever done. But i recommend reading the video description. It explains more ^_^ If you read this whole thing, arigatto! :sweat:



Thank you again! I hope this video makes you feel something. idk what it might be, but sill..i hope ^_^

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Re: Kenzichu (Orwell approved) Clannad|Candle|White Tie Event

Post by Animated » Wed Sep 02, 2009 4:33 am

Well well well... :)

I just watched it, and i can say you have improved quite a lot. Especially in the beginning, i thought that it would amaze me with all those fade outs (yeah... even though they were 2...).

What else... well, i'm sorry but i also have to say that you did a terrible job on lip sync :? . I mean, i was watching the characters talking, and it didn't feel like they were saying the lyrics of the song at all - it was more like some random scenes with people talking. Moreover, it felt like that, in some parts of the song, you didn't edit anything at all. You just had to shorten your clips and put some more of them.

And... as for the end of the amv... |:> I really hope AaronAMV doesn't see this.


Overally good job, but you're STILL an amateur. Just keep trying! :D :up:
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Re: Kenzichu (Orwell approved) Clannad|Candle|White Tie Event

Post by ExSphere » Wed Sep 02, 2009 7:45 am

please only post 1 video a week on the AMV announcment thread.
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Re: Kenzichu (Orwell approved) Clannad|Candle|White Tie Event

Post by Kyssifur » Wed Sep 02, 2009 8:03 am

Animated wrote:Overally good job, but you're STILL an amateur. Just keep trying! :D :up:
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Re: Kenzichu (Orwell approved) Clannad|Candle|White Tie Event

Post by Otohiko » Wed Sep 02, 2009 8:50 am

Cause Orwell has a great taste in everything :P

maybe that's why he keeps calling my videos a "pile of bricks"...


And yeah, I agree, you're improving rather well. Some good effort on this video and, imho, no big problems. It's not really my kind of song/idea, but I can appreciate this at least.

And ExSphere is right, I'll merge the thread with your previous one shortly....
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Re: Kenzichu (Orwell approved) Clannad|Candle|White Tie Event

Post by Kireblue » Wed Sep 02, 2009 9:24 am

I just finished a Clannad amv that is meant to be sad and depressing. So this happy and uplifting amv was actually really refreshing for me. The lip sync definitely needs improving, but overall, this is a nice amv.

My advice to you is to slow down a bit. Within the last month, you have released 9 different amvs. And I feel that each one of them (especially this one) could have been greatly improved if you had spent more time on it. For example, there isn't really any timing "mistakes or problems" in your video, but I feel that all of them could have been improved if you had experimented a bit more. (like comparing how a full second fade in looks instead of a half second fade in. Or changing the playback speed of certain clips in order to make key moments begin and end at the right time)
I personally feel that the key to improving isn't simply making more videos. The key to improving is to work on each one of your videos till the point where you truly feel that you have pushed the absolute limit of your current editing ability. And the more times you reach this limit, the more experience you'll receive. But even so, I wholeheartedly acknowledge the fact that you are definitely making progress.

And like i said, this amv is a really refreshing spin on a series that is usually shown in a sad and slightly melancholic perspective. :up: You truly are amazing when it comes to picking songs, anime, and matching their feeling.

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Re: Kenzichu (Orwell approved) Clannad|Candle|White Tie Event

Post by mirkosp » Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:05 am

ExSphere wrote:please only post 1 video a week on the AMV announcment thread.
:amv:
Not exactly like that:
You may only make one new thread per week. If you have multiple videos to announce, either wait a week or add them to the same post.
More vids per week are fine, they just have to go in the same thread. :P
So yeah, merged etc.
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