lol interesting version of the song ;D
With the opening - idk, from an editing point of view, I thought the scenes were boring, because I knew they were the intro. But at least you've got some idea of sync.
To be honest, most of the effects didn't seem to enhance the footage. Like they seemed out of place. I'd suggest looking at the top 10% amvs on the site for ideas and to see the possibilities.

That helps me, and it's fun.
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... ercent.php
(remember, you can change the year at the top for the all-time greats and see different videos displayed)
I agree about the lipsync, and seeing the small cutout REPETITION of the SAME footage looked a bit lazy. If you had to use lipsync, you could have a shot where you can see him talk to Ichigo. Because that would continue the action, rather than see some guy's ugly mug talking for a few seconds.
But it is good for a first AMV. Really! You've used a lot of effects, and your timing was good. Just keep polishing your technique as you see it.

Also, the opinion exchange forum
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/forum/viewforum.php?f=6
would be good to test your video (you offer opinions in exchange for a beta on your vid - don't upload it on the org if it's a beta, only the final copy - that's if you ever wanted to upload the original file on the org - some people don't like streaming because it reduces the quality)
OK, cheers!

Let me know if you need any help.