Pain Towards Healing (Acceptance)

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Pain Towards Healing (Acceptance)

Post by Recliner Man » Tue Aug 12, 2008 5:36 pm

I'm proud to present my first true blue AMV: "Pain Towards Healing (Acceptance)." I hope you enjoy it. 8-)

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=161490
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"I accept chaos. I don't know whether it accepts me."-Arthur Rimbaud (Ben Whishaw), I'm Not There.

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Post by CodeZTM » Tue Aug 12, 2008 5:41 pm


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Post by Recliner Man » Tue Aug 12, 2008 5:47 pm

Thanks, CodeChrono. I still don't know my way around here.
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Post by CodeZTM » Tue Aug 12, 2008 6:07 pm

That's ok. Just use the VidID= button and put in your video's id.

Now, here's my review of your video.

Firstly, the quality of the video was good. Nice video quality and nice sound quality. It was pretty to look at. That's a major plus.

Secondly, you had basic understanding of sync. The audio and the video worked together well in a small manner. I think that some different use of footage other than the last two episodes would have added something more special.

Thirdly, there wasn't much editing outside of cutting footage down from the last two episodes. This was a slow paced song, so it wasn't too bad, but some more manipulation of footage would have been nice.

Fourthly, the concept has been done over and over again. The agony in the last two episodes of Fruits Basket is good footage and good atmosphere, but you need some sort of extra "kick" to it in order to make it better. Maybe overlaying memories Kyo and Tohru had would have made it better.

Overally, it was average. It wasn't bad by any means, but it was world-shattering either. I look forward to your new work.

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Post by Recliner Man » Tue Aug 12, 2008 6:50 pm

Thanks for the review. I do admit that this is the most basic work i've ever made. It was more or less made for me to get back in my groove.

I know that this concept was done a lot, but this was my own statement. That's what I'm proud of the most.
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